on Love Greased by Jeremi B. Handrinos
16 Mar 2005, 5:48 PM
well endowed lie? that is something I don't hear often......
on On the Occasion by tadpole
13 Mar 2005, 1:40 PM
this is nice - 7 -
megan
megan
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2005, 5:45 PM
unlikely though that would be intersting (last verse) nice though i really like this
-megan
-megan
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2005, 2:57 PM
umm.......
-megan
-megan
on "America The Beautiful" by jroday
16 Mar 2005, 3:00 PM
idealism is nice - but will it put bread on the tables of all these people u discuss?
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2005, 5:49 PM
not to be ruede but your rudamentary rhyming turns me off immediatley...............
-megan
-megan
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2005, 5:50 PM
i really like this
[cept for the republican part..:)]
-megan
[cept for the republican part..:)]
-megan
on Nicholas Martin by horus8
16 Mar 2005, 5:51 PM
never knew him - now i cant -
on Out Doubt! by wlshepherd
16 Mar 2005, 5:53 PM
large word cant save a poem - 5
on A good little poem by INTRANSIT
30 Mar 2005, 2:39 PM
i like this (though i dont eat pickles).......
on Follow by unknown
30 Mar 2005, 2:41 PM
i dont really like this and it reminds me slightly of the clown in the movie version of it (stephen king)
on You Pick It by durr_T_hip_E
2 Apr 2005, 10:29 AM
i agree with dovina it was good but at the end the poem died right along with the kid - 7 for an other wise nice work
on Amsterdam One by durr_T_hip_E
2 Apr 2005, 10:30 AM
not my style but its sounds nice
on All About Me by chocolate9009
2 Apr 2005, 10:43 AM
eww
on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222
2 Apr 2005, 10:51 AM
this is one of the most beautiful things i have ever read, and the way it just kept me going from one part to the next is amazing, i usually dont like things this long but this is beauitufl
on The Universe by durr_T_hip_E
2 Apr 2005, 10:06 AM
not to bad actually, but it could use some work for sure, perhaps if you left the one word per line format, and it into like a tanka or haiku or something it would sound better
on The Joynt by durr_T_hip_E
2 Apr 2005, 10:08 AM
interesting to say the least
on criminal by durr_T_hip_E
2 Apr 2005, 10:10 AM
it sounds nice but thats all it does, a word to the wise: don't try to build a hidden "meaning" when it isn't there, either be tricky or be straight forward but dont have nothing
on A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus
2 Apr 2005, 11:03 AM
gave me chills
on Into My World by sliver
2 Apr 2005, 11:11 AM
this is so beautiful