on Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin
13 Mar 2003, 8:11 PM
Eee! Can I join in? That is downright brilliant. (I assume that it's Bach's Toccata -- the one sometimes known as the Doomsday Toccata? Good good.)
on Ten new questions from Dan Rather by horus8
28 Feb 2003, 6:55 AM
Number one: you forgot 'deliberately mispronounce' his name as well.
on Last Nightâs Dream (Freud-o-riffic) by razorgrin
8 Apr 2003, 9:54 AM
I still haven't figured it out yet, dahling. Sorry.
on Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin
10 Feb 2003, 1:45 PM
Tee hee.
on All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) by razorgrin
8 Apr 2003, 9:58 AM
I forgot to ask... if I come across you doing this again sometime, what do I do?
on Bible Quoting Fag Killer (So it is said) by Blindproject217
1 Apr 2003, 9:20 PM
I haven't laughed so much for ages!!! Congratulations!!! That was BRILLIANT!!!!
Oh, wait a minute. You were SERIOUS? Gack.
I am deeply offended that you should refer to some of my type as agnostics as opposed to atheists. This is quite discriminatory. Desist, cur.
Oh, wait a minute. You were SERIOUS? Gack.
I am deeply offended that you should refer to some of my type as agnostics as opposed to atheists. This is quite discriminatory. Desist, cur.
on Perversions 7: Viva Las Naked by razorgrin
28 Mar 2003, 11:12 PM
Alas, I'm afraid these aren't your best, darlink. 1's alright, 2's somewhat obscure and boring, and 3's nothing special. Though funny.
Is Hank one of your acquaintances? If so, please don't tell me which one.
Is Hank one of your acquaintances? If so, please don't tell me which one.
on some deleted poem
28 Mar 2003, 5:52 AM
Using 'Where no birds sing' as a first line reminds me too much of 'La Belle Dame Sans Merci' for comfort.
on A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz
14 Mar 2003, 5:54 AM
Pssst... despite the fact that their last letters are the same, 'Blood' and 'good' don't rhyme.
on A Buncha Dungeons and Dragons Haiku by razorgrin
13 Mar 2003, 8:07 PM
First I must deal with your talking about nothing else when I see you, then I must deal with it in your poetry... Bah. See if I ever make you a CD again. I give you points because it's funny, remove some points because I'm sick of the subject, add some because it's amusing to see your conversation put in poetry, and remove some because I've heard it all before. Love 'n' kisses. Really.
on Best Present Ever by razorgrin
13 Mar 2003, 8:08 PM
I remove one point. You know damn well why. (There. See? I'm getting better. I only took off one point. And I didn't kill anyone last Saturday. Be happy.)
on balthazar by UnityMitford
28 Feb 2003, 6:54 AM
This is much much better if you mean 'burning bridges' literally.
on some deleted poem
27 Feb 2003, 7:58 AM
Thou art brilliant, m'love. I know it's an accepted fact, but it bears repeating occasionally. 'Flesh tears' alone gets you a ten. I don't think I know anyone but you who could use blood quite so much in one stanza and get away with it.
on Gargamel & Azriel by Bachus
26 Feb 2003, 1:32 PM
Azrael, Azrael, AzraEl, AZRAEL!!! Why is there not one English person on fifty who can remember the damn cat's name, and not one that seems to be able to spell it???
on some deleted poem
25 Feb 2003, 9:44 AM
Ah, this again. Excellent. Couple of little things: one, the last line of the first stanza might work better if enclosed in brackets -- I can't recall if you had it thus the first time you posted this or not. Also, same line, either get rid of the comma or add one after 'all'. Excellent none the less.
on Sleepy Geek by razorgrin
25 Feb 2003, 10:02 AM
Hee hee... I remember that evening. Sorry I couldn't do anything about it for you.
on some deleted poem
11 Feb 2003, 6:10 PM
Tee hee. That last one is hilarious. I grant you a ten because I'm feeling strangely generous, and also because the poem that came up when I came on here a moment ago was absolutely dreadful. When exactly is this production, by the way?
on The Long Walk Back by Jigg
11 Feb 2003, 6:14 PM
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
19 Feb 2003, 10:32 AM
The last one is excellent, but the other two don't seem as great, m'dear. Possibly because they don't really let people figure out what they're about as well as the others do.
on Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin
19 Feb 2003, 10:28 AM
Sweetheart, sweetheart, sweetheart. Th'art a very sick child. One of the better crops, indeed.