on science by whispern_smoke_wisp
5 Aug 2005, 6:08 PM
hae any of you ever hugged a dog?
replying on science by whispern_smoke_wisp
11 Apr 2005, 3:20 PM
okay, i dont like to be rude, but im in a bad mood and you are being an idiot, okay,
when did i say that i believed the article mentioned in this poem ..... ?!?!? NEVER........and by the way....its a poem NOT an autobiography, did you actually read it, or what, okay, why would i SHAKE MY HEAD to something i agreed with
geez
please try to not be this annoying
when did i say that i believed the article mentioned in this poem ..... ?!?!? NEVER........and by the way....its a poem NOT an autobiography, did you actually read it, or what, okay, why would i SHAKE MY HEAD to something i agreed with
geez
please try to not be this annoying
replying on science by whispern_smoke_wisp
10 Apr 2005, 5:53 PM
wow
u totally missed the point of this 100%, all the way
u totally missed the point of this 100%, all the way
replying on cacoon by whispern_smoke_wisp
3 Apr 2005, 12:25 PM
thankyou
on Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii
9 Mar 2005, 3:53 PM
i might like this better if i didnt have a strong distaste for rhyme
-zarina
-zarina
on with no words to write by nentwined
9 Mar 2005, 3:52 PM
i really really like this!
-zarina
-zarina
on Nitro by NNirvana13666
9 Mar 2005, 3:49 PM
a tad to cliche to be really good
-zarina
-zarina
on Some Things by Christof
9 Mar 2005, 3:44 PM
i like this i do - but one comment - be more specific when you say she - it was a little confusing at times as to whether you were discussing the librarian or the girl.......
-zarina
-zarina
on Revolution by Nitroxide
9 Mar 2005, 3:43 PM
i like the intention but, i dont think we will ever have a Utopia, at least not one this earth, things can get better but they wont change, until people do
and people haven't changed that much at all since the time of the grecians,
thats 2000+ years of human nature working against you
it would be nice though (the utopia)
-zarina
and people haven't changed that much at all since the time of the grecians,
thats 2000+ years of human nature working against you
it would be nice though (the utopia)
-zarina
on Infatuation by noonewantstobealone
9 Mar 2005, 3:38 PM
1) if it is on a site called poemranker.com why would you post that which is not a poem
2) it definetly sounds like a poetic attempt, I'm not quite sure how well you suceeded by it sounds like a poem to me
3) it was a good effort and I will acknowledge that so often the words to describe what we feel escape us and we almost always come up short in trying to describe both the happy and the poignant
4) all that aside i don't really care for this that much i give it a 6
-zarina
2) it definetly sounds like a poetic attempt, I'm not quite sure how well you suceeded by it sounds like a poem to me
3) it was a good effort and I will acknowledge that so often the words to describe what we feel escape us and we almost always come up short in trying to describe both the happy and the poignant
4) all that aside i don't really care for this that much i give it a 6
-zarina
replying on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp
7 Mar 2005, 4:23 PM
thanks :)
-zarina
-zarina
replying on The 8th Day by whispern_smoke_wisp
6 Mar 2005, 4:18 PM
thanks - im not so good at spelling (i should probably work on that)
-zarina
-zarina
replying on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp
6 Mar 2005, 4:15 PM
thanks!
-zarina
-zarina
replying on A Fabrication by whispern_smoke_wisp
6 Mar 2005, 12:00 PM
thank you so much! i guess this means I have suceeded then(as a poet) if i've made a reader happy!
-zarina
-zarina
on Do I Know U? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR
5 Mar 2005, 9:49 AM
i agree with crooked_smile
on What? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR
5 Mar 2005, 9:48 AM
i agree with i_am_the_popsicle