poemranker ::20 most recent comments by matt door and replies

Comments bymatt door, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis II by SupremeDreamer 31 Aug 2006, 7:42 PM
Did u mean plains or planes, or did you just not care - 'cause this was quite long and stale. Elementary son - sorry.Simple and "plain".
on Valentine by zodiac 31 Aug 2006, 7:33 PM
Read like a fucking obituary - long and painful. Your ego harms your poetry - sorry.
on Nude Falling Down Staircase by zodiac 31 Aug 2006, 7:30 PM
so very tired - so lame - no sheets? try something more
personable - a tad more broad - you're too selfish.
on Ghosts of years (rhymey edit) by ecargo 30 Mar 2006, 8:53 PM
Good thoughts - yet the words fail this poem. Too many words are used - it stains your meaning with feckless hot air.
on 9/11 - The Jumpers by Caducus 30 Mar 2006, 8:30 PM
Your skills have'nt risen - that's for sure!"the jumpers jumped"? "twin towers fell"? Come on - be a tad more crafty than this? Too basic.
on The Beautiful Lover by Caducus 30 Mar 2006, 8:18 PM
I like this - last line could be better - still very good! "deceits" should be deceit's. -8-
on SOMETIMES? by Garrett S Sexton 29 Mar 2006, 6:51 PM
Is this for some reason almost funny? Or just acutely sad? Garrett - this seems to be pure unadulterated shit.
Or is it just me?
on A Lover's Lament by woodstock20000 29 Mar 2006, 6:41 PM
I like the simplicity and regret, but the fluency and word choice could be revised.
on Sarah, Freefalling (twee for AlChemy) by ecargo 29 Mar 2006, 6:31 PM
Seems tired - like it's been done before now? It is a good poem - just not striking - "white-faced hills" and "rasberry girl" seems to have been written before? Or is it just my feeble mind?
on Time Thief by Dovina 28 Mar 2006, 7:42 PM
Parts of this are fairly good - other parts - really suck quite frankly. Keep posting, because you have talent, this piece
just lacks it for the most part. Sorry.
on My First Hangover by mindsigns 28 Mar 2006, 7:33 PM
Did'nt know Nick-at-Night was holding a poetry contest.
This would win the 7th grade class by a hair.
on Squalid by Caducus 23 Mar 2006, 9:52 PM
Maybe just maybe,
what we seek is less words from rhyming vultures, who pick at the bones of poetry - in search of something they found years and sentences ago?
on Sonnet by zodiac 23 Mar 2006, 9:35 PM
I like this - but it seems tired - almost easy - yet forced - like you're searching for something that's already there? Common "Zodiac" - same as you ever was -
just enough talent - way too much time!
on Valentine by zodiac 23 Mar 2006, 9:15 PM
yawn
on i realize by http://robynhood 12 Mar 2006, 6:48 PM
Read this aloud before you post it next time - sounds quite improper - does it not? Thought and emotion are placed well - but grammar and meter is quite lacking.
on Boundaries by Dhanesh M Kumar 12 Mar 2006, 6:33 PM
Jubilant dolphin? Passionate bird? Giraffe's head?
Erase this whole thing and start over.Sorry so harsh - but this really needs work.
on Crowded by INTRANSIT 12 Mar 2006, 6:26 PM
Common repetition?
on Nude Falling Down Staircase by zodiac 12 Mar 2006, 8:54 AM
Spew
replying on Navy Pier by matt door 12 Mar 2006, 8:46 AM
No - I can't.
replying on Navy Pier by matt door 10 Mar 2006, 8:11 PM
Thank you.