Poemranker [20 most recent comments by darby pyn (61-80) and replies]

replying on godhead by ThePariahDog 17 Dec 2003, 11:36 PM

Brutal and exact. very nice. 9

replying on Cast a shadow. by darby pyn 17 Dec 2003, 9:39 PM

Thank you dreamer. I fixed it. AAHHH

replying on untitled by darby pyn 15 Dec 2003, 9:20 PM

I go by scubasteve on another site.

replying on Head. by darby pyn 11 Dec 2003, 6:13 PM

is it the kiss at the end that leaves a bad taste in your mouth baba. yeah I knew that would
get some response.

replying on Head. by darby pyn 10 Dec 2003, 8:43 PM

thanks dreamer. I was hesitating to put this one on.
glad you like it.

on Death & the Twisted Tree by SupremeDreamer 10 Dec 2003, 7:56 PM

it's a nice visual. an epic in black and white.
for some reason I see "night of the hunter" in
my mind when I read this with mitchem as the devil.
very nice. 8

on Poppy,diamond,s and twoo coward's by The_Third_Isis 9 Dec 2003, 1:24 AM

SWEET ANGST. I LOVE YOUR REVENGE. 9

replying on From Hell, a Vilanelle by horus8 8 Dec 2003, 11:32 PM

Punk rock accolades. a 9 for you horus 8

replying on No delusions. by darby pyn 6 Dec 2003, 10:48 AM

Thanks shuushin. this poem is a work in progress. I want to
add more I'm gonna work on it.

replying on Biased. by darby pyn 3 Dec 2003, 10:30 PM

I like your suggestion. "natural selection" has a great finality
to it. "evolution by war" seemed to fit the rhyme flow better
to my ear. but you make a good point.
thank you.

replying on I have thirteen knives, and a sore riddled Black pussy by horus8 22 Nov 2003, 9:40 PM

Nice imagery. by the way how is godswife. she is pure class.

replying on Transient by darby pyn 22 Nov 2003, 9:12 PM

Thank you. it's been a while.

replying on the two faces of the bar social. by darby pyn 13 Oct 2003, 11:13 AM

I was drunk when I wrote this. I just wanted to write and
vent. reading this back to myself I don't like it much.
oh well thanks for the critique.

on would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil 7 Jan 2003, 2:14 AM

great. have an 8.

replying on www.people.freenet.de/freeek/SajjadAli.swf by darby pyn 5 Jan 2003, 12:23 AM

Not the beer.
well Im off to the bar. Ill have a couple of shots for you.
thanks

replying on just another punk song by darby pyn 5 Dec 2002, 9:21 AM

I spelled attitude wrong. sorry
I'm a little tired lads.

replying on just another punk song by darby pyn 5 Dec 2002, 9:19 AM

PAKI I'm not trying to sway anyone to a certain style or
atitude about punk. the title is a rip off of a bad brains
song " just another dam song ". it's just a screw work
poem, song I wrote at work. I was bored. I do have
more deep poems more abstract. but this is not one of them.
I hope you liked it for what it is. gabba gabba hey.

replying on Tainted by darby pyn 13 Nov 2002, 9:30 AM

thank you.

replying on Selfish by darby pyn 30 Oct 2002, 11:39 AM

the shallow grave is an actual " shallow grave"
the poem is about a true story.
this woman in florida. hit this man on the road. instead
of taking him to the hospital she drove home with him still
on the hood. pulled into her garage and waited for him to
die. then she and some friends burried him. I forgot how they
caught her. this was about 3 years ago.

replying on Selfish by darby pyn 29 Oct 2002, 6:38 PM

not bad. I didn't think it would fit well if I
swiched it. I was wrong.