on Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8
23 Feb 2005, 7:55 PM
That was insane.
on My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Feb 2005, 7:51 PM
A sense of "doom" here. I like that. Our words mean everything, especially "mine". Paint it black and "red", and add a bunny with a snake body.
replying on Lets recreate hell real properly by Crakyamuni
17 Feb 2005, 6:11 PM
I think your right. The middle is contrived. thanks.
replying on Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina
11 Feb 2005, 12:45 PM
Yes I see now! Thankyou for the vision. I'm 8ing you for that.
It is a prayer!
It is a prayer!
replying on Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina
11 Feb 2005, 10:52 AM
and if I'm totally off on my assumption about your subject, tell me why.
Gracias, bonita
Gracias, bonita
on Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina
11 Feb 2005, 10:51 AM
It's interesting enough to get a 7, but it's without the point of intensity, I think, underlying this beautiful subject. Is it about a (forgive this term) Conversation with God.
I created a more juvenile counterpart to this poem a few ago titled " An intolerable rash brother". I too have my bones to pick with the great "You". So I've canvased the world.
Vote on the poem I mentioned o' mine, comment on it, drain it of extraneous blabbery, pick it asunder, and get back to me. I want and value your opinion.
I created a more juvenile counterpart to this poem a few ago titled " An intolerable rash brother". I too have my bones to pick with the great "You". So I've canvased the world.
Vote on the poem I mentioned o' mine, comment on it, drain it of extraneous blabbery, pick it asunder, and get back to me. I want and value your opinion.
on Family Portrait by woodstock20000
8 Feb 2005, 12:06 PM
An average but drowsy diary entry might be better recieved from your Grandmother. I like nostalgia, it places us in the present, but this is not a poem.
on Paris 1941-63 by Mister Cakes
8 Feb 2005, 12:03 PM
"Got more soul than a sock with a hole." Doom.
on Paris 1941-63 by Mister Cakes
8 Feb 2005, 12:01 PM
I'm not sure about the reference to the time period, but I think socks have sentimental value for poets.
replying on An intolerable rash brother by Crakyamuni
8 Feb 2005, 11:59 AM
Thanks for voting.
replying on Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent) by Crakyamuni
6 Feb 2005, 3:22 PM
tuh.
on Nicholas Martin's last great paper by Bachus
6 Feb 2005, 3:00 PM
All this seems a little "unsettling"
as do most beautiful things.
on Pictures of June by wilco
3 Feb 2005, 4:48 PM
Illustrated passion spreads like new disease
A nice ring to that, and as a whole it's working.
replying on Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent) by Crakyamuni
3 Feb 2005, 4:44 PM
Not trying doesn't mean being incapable of success.
In any case I appreciate the comment.
Mark
In any case I appreciate the comment.
Mark
on 32 Truths and 1 Lie by wilco
2 Feb 2005, 4:24 PM
Right now the telephone is the heaviest object on Earth.
Goddamn man. You have mentioned at least a dozen truths from my book. After the comment you made I had a sense you were good. Genuine in your condition.
Keep this love alive.
Goddamn man. You have mentioned at least a dozen truths from my book. After the comment you made I had a sense you were good. Genuine in your condition.
Keep this love alive.
replying on Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent) by Crakyamuni
2 Feb 2005, 4:15 PM
wilco- A phenomenal band.
I've now completely eliminated all traces of the O.G. S.o.S.
due to my own distaste for it. It was about despair,obvious, maybe, but I'm in some straits right now. I feel bound to this dilemma, but crippled, without any options except blind denial.
This vent tent revision is a return to a sort of stream of thought structure, which is very loose and sometimes confusing, but not contrived. I find this process can help me create something temporary but stable(like a tent),and it's rather therapeutic.
I'm not seeking kudos here, or trying to contend with the prophets, but life's frustrations need an apparatus. I'm drawing with words. I'm a visual artist by blood, and a non practicing catholic in recovery, as well as an admirer of poets.
You write with an honest tone in your comment, thats so rare, Thankyou.
Mark
I've now completely eliminated all traces of the O.G. S.o.S.
due to my own distaste for it. It was about despair,obvious, maybe, but I'm in some straits right now. I feel bound to this dilemma, but crippled, without any options except blind denial.
This vent tent revision is a return to a sort of stream of thought structure, which is very loose and sometimes confusing, but not contrived. I find this process can help me create something temporary but stable(like a tent),and it's rather therapeutic.
I'm not seeking kudos here, or trying to contend with the prophets, but life's frustrations need an apparatus. I'm drawing with words. I'm a visual artist by blood, and a non practicing catholic in recovery, as well as an admirer of poets.
You write with an honest tone in your comment, thats so rare, Thankyou.
Mark
on Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent) by Crakyamuni
2 Feb 2005, 4:01 PM
I revised that crappiness. I'm completely ready for all negative stabs and jabs. Bring the pain.
replying on Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent) by Crakyamuni
2 Feb 2005, 3:07 PM
It did. I'm sorry for the limp lashing I did this a.m. I doubt it phased you, and yet it was unbecoming.
I've got things. Not your problem though.
I enjoy your work, and I guess thats why it was petty to be as insulting as I was. I got defensive.
Apologies.
replying on Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent) by Crakyamuni
2 Feb 2005, 3:03 PM
Also, where did you find that high horse? It seems you can only spit worthless slander. You haven't posted up, but you still whip out the old drowsy one liners.
Make something. Then come back with malice.
replying on Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent) by Crakyamuni
2 Feb 2005, 2:54 PM
This is good. Honesty,good.