on A Thing I Must Do by Dovina
2 Feb 2005, 9:47 AM
Makes tons of sense that you never made it past base 2 with the dude in the bleachers, perhaps you need a good shave?, or a night light to guide your non spatially aware ass.
replying on Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent) by Crakyamuni
2 Feb 2005, 9:35 AM
Doesn't make sense? Doesn't make fu*ckin sense?! Yeah, so look around. It's all sense and sensibility in life isn't it my dear? Just God's glories tits leaking out beauty and structure. You have the sensibilities of a jackrabbit from tucson, az.
You got some nerve lady. Shaken not stirred.
Clear enough.
You got some nerve lady. Shaken not stirred.
Clear enough.
on spiritually driven by Crakyamuni
10 Jan 2005, 12:42 PM
can i get a vote ? Throw me a fuckin bone here.
on AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul
8 Jan 2005, 10:43 AM
Trite.
on You have 7 hours to live... now here's the bad news by D. $ Fontera
8 Jan 2005, 10:40 AM
I think it's about Texas Hold Em. I love that game.
replying on The Christ Omelette by horus8
8 Jan 2005, 10:37 AM
What came first Jesus or the egg? All unecessary blabbery aside, I think this poem is slap-and-paste poetics. One of your avg. reeds. For sneeking up on the unsuspecting I can only hope.
Unfortunately blasphemy is also my arena, and well, I can rock that shit.
Unfortunately blasphemy is also my arena, and well, I can rock that shit.
replying on Johnny football painter by Crakyamuni
7 Jan 2005, 10:01 AM
Changed it a bit, thanks for the feed back.
replying on Let God Unwrite Itself by daggatolar
7 Jan 2005, 9:52 AM
This poem touches on a great deal of the metaphysical forces in written word, but in places I'm unsure of what to make of lines,(To "Stair" feelings capable of everything).
It's good, feels genuine.
It's good, feels genuine.
on Johnny football painter by Crakyamuni
6 Jan 2005, 9:18 PM
typos anyone?
replying on No sally, lay your troubles to bed by Crakyamuni
5 Jan 2005, 2:56 PM
like the common ranting in seventeen pieces.
replying on horse ass, whore ass, poor asses by peaceseeker
5 Jan 2005, 2:53 PM
Definetely a poem! This spoke in volumes to me about the inherit darkness that sexuality calls forward in us all. I found it uplifting, human.
on Impotently Informed by cuddlytiger17
4 Jan 2005, 4:32 PM
A nice read, and definetely full of empathy. The turmoil we call life can cause a sense of longing, but it's the syntax, the breaking sun from the clouds, that lets us know this has happened so many times.
replying on No sally, lay your troubles to bed by Crakyamuni
4 Jan 2005, 8:55 AM
I fixed it bitches
replying on Malaysia by Crakyamuni
3 Jan 2005, 4:16 PM
whats your thought on the editing of recent?
on Emotions Color Your Thoughts by cuddlytiger17
3 Jan 2005, 4:01 PM
I like it because of it's final line. Three dimensional logic is fuckin restrictive, and nothing will cause you more heart ache. Hope is fleeting, happiness fleeting, glory fleeting.. but we can have the time of our lives chasing them down. This is and "we are".
replying on flesh and tension by Crakyamuni
3 Jan 2005, 3:55 PM
I love the moon. What about soap? word sculpture is nice.
on You by sk8boardandpoems
3 Jan 2005, 3:22 PM
Have you met crystal lane swift?
replying on How rifted by Crakyamuni
17 Jan 2004, 4:57 PM
Physics, taoism, and the merry making of old english 40's.
Horus you are a visionary! It's like you know the real me!
are you single? Or just rampant? Thanks for the commentary. I hope you enjoy my misspellings and overreacins.
Horus you are a visionary! It's like you know the real me!
are you single? Or just rampant? Thanks for the commentary. I hope you enjoy my misspellings and overreacins.
replying on Malaysia by Crakyamuni
10 Jan 2004, 7:57 PM
The end is crap, I will be the second to say so. If you have "constructive" criticism, I'm all eyes. I'm really just a hack here horus. I paint and make shit. It sounds savage, but it is. The last lines were Casteneda influenced, but I'm no warrior. More of a dreamer. Or a drunkard.
Yo. I'm a skeptic.