on Belle Melange/The Curse of Millhaven by lmp
9 Jun 2012, 4:50 AM
excuse my ignorance....but isn't this already a poem/ballad? as you say by nick cave? If that's the case then what it this?
on Max's Poems by nentwined
9 Jun 2012, 4:46 AM
wtf....moronic
on Self-Inflicted Wounds by wilco
18 Feb 2011, 3:13 PM
at least your just rusty, I, on the other hand am flabby...takes a bit of getting back into it huh?
Whenever I pine for you to be mine
I remember what my father used to say
You can have anything you want but you cant have
everything you want at the same time
If this is what you want
you can't have me
there's probably one too many wants...if this is what you need
you can't have me
and pine, really?
I remember what my father used to say
You can have anything you want but you cant have
everything you want at the same time
If this is what you want
you can't have me
there's probably one too many wants...if this is what you need
you can't have me
and pine, really?
on tree in a flood by Skamper
18 Feb 2011, 2:51 PM
too quick and too flabby, hmmm something to ponder over. Thanks guys
on sperladnik: the sequel by malpaso
6 Jul 2008, 4:50 AM
made me giggle a little awkwardly, not quite getting the hang of it ;)
on in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined
6 Jul 2008, 4:44 AM
I like that..change without true progress...
the word inevitable jars a little with me, not sure why
the word inevitable jars a little with me, not sure why
replying on Daddy works at the Bank by Skamper
6 Jul 2008, 4:24 AM
yeah...I feel the same..thx
replying on I Got Mine Designed by Skamper
6 Jul 2008, 4:23 AM
no, not attacking the frost at all...just puting some emphasis on the process of defrosting, and no matter what the item is it's never the same as the original. It always loses something, and I wonder what we lose when tinkering with life.
replying on I Got Mine Designed by Skamper
6 Jul 2008, 4:20 AM
some thoughts about artificial insemination, a bit of a follow on from Daddy works at the bank. As for the hint/smell of porpoise, do you live by the sea?
on who wansa do that? by malpaso
28 Dec 2007, 11:44 PM
As much as I enjoy the short poem, due to lack of true inteligence...I can't seem to get a handle on this one. There's no oomph or moment of clarity, or nod, or small smile, or any of the things that brings instant understanding of what your saying, that should come with shorter writes.
"You wanna go do somethin'?"
sighs
"Nah"
- boredom, apathy...a statement, but is it poetry? hmmm?
"You wanna go do somethin'?"
sighs
"Nah"
- boredom, apathy...a statement, but is it poetry? hmmm?
replying on A-looky here. by malpaso
28 Dec 2007, 11:37 PM
oh duh! Of course it does...I can be dense...and I knew I had commented on this one, but it seems to have disappeared.
swapping to competing existances reads to me like a race, rather than a statement of how it is. fingers driven explains the fingers are being driven by something without his control whereas driven fingers, to me, seems to imply he has control. hyphen dropped as well as line 14... 13 stays, I like it. :)
Thanks for the input - well appreciated as always.
Thanks for the input - well appreciated as always.
on Easter Egg Hunt by Dovina
29 Nov 2007, 3:32 AM
I wish I could understand this, but the language is out of my reach. :(
replying on Missing - You by Skamper
29 Nov 2007, 3:20 AM
Iv'e been messing about with this one Dovina, to get the last stanza working as I see it, to no avail. I might leave it for a bit and see if anything shows up later. The rain/sane has bearing though - we are both a little unstable and we met in the rain...ah! so romantic, a couple of soggy fruit loops :)
replying on Missing - You by Skamper
29 Nov 2007, 3:15 AM
I know it's such an overused phrase - too easy yeah?