on First Time In A Long Time by EAger to Offend
25 Oct 2003, 10:27 AM
Rarely. I don't often read what you write. This was worth the side trip. I'll swing by again sometime.
on My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit
25 Oct 2003, 10:18 AM
Ever had a stricture? Annoying they are. The cure is quite embarrasing. It gives you first hand experience of a menstrual cycle. minus the cramps.
on I have no problem with short people of color or religion by horus8
25 Oct 2003, 9:45 AM
Volumetric efficiency. Now, why is it not part of a book? Grappling with not becoming what you despise most I assume. Grapple on.
replying on falling in with the wrong crowd. by richa
23 Oct 2003, 6:48 AM
If you have the alternate writing, I suggest you have them side by side and read both aloud and then decide. After your explanation, it makes more sense, particularly the first stan.
I wish everyone understood what I mean all the time, but poetry wouldn't be a challenge then.
I wish everyone understood what I mean all the time, but poetry wouldn't be a challenge then.
on falling in with the wrong crowd. by richa
23 Oct 2003, 6:42 AM
a diamond may cut his windscreen with light. I get the image but is it a diamond or light? I stumble here for some reason. I like it otherwise. Most what you write reaches me, makes me think. Keep it up.
on Autumn At All Saints Church by Caducus
23 Oct 2003, 6:32 AM
Cram-o-rama. Pain, Beauty, religion,halloweenish creepiness, love. Damn good details too.
replying on Go On a Business Trip by abecedarian
22 Oct 2003, 6:21 PM
Stop stealing from Dilbert!!!! Or Bob the dinosaur will appear and give you a wedgie. :)
replying on African Killer Bees, it's not the smell of smoke by <{Baba^Yaga}>
22 Oct 2003, 9:21 AM
Louie Bloo Raspberry. I'm such a child. Keeps me in line.
I know I'm a bane in the neck. Once I have "tooled up" a little better and gotten through some personal stuff, I will write better poetry. I assure you that hanging around the fives, while a great group as it is, is not my goal. I'm still learning patience. I ask nothing else from you.
on Metaphysical Poets by Bachus
20 Oct 2003, 11:20 AM
two questions:
Why only one (C)?
How does one turn themselves over to their ruling planet, anyway.
Why only one (C)?
How does one turn themselves over to their ruling planet, anyway.
on Twinkle Twinkle Little Star by Yatasuma
20 Oct 2003, 11:15 AM
L-4 with much stronger ties. small bump.
on laporoscopic library by FreeFormFixation
17 Oct 2003, 8:22 AM
Excellent.
on Night On the Town by razorgrin
17 Oct 2003, 8:19 AM
You've outdone yourself with this grouped trio R.G.
Kicks ass.
Kicks ass.
on Country music & handguns by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Oct 2003, 8:17 AM
no comment
replying on The Ren (The magic in naming) by Bachus
17 Oct 2003, 8:11 AM
Some THING? Or a being? and why the (?) What I found was applied to cats. and I didn't spend the time to absorb it fully. I will in the near future.
replying on The Ren (The magic in naming) by Bachus
16 Oct 2003, 8:15 PM
Found. However, since you have so many, which one rings true? Is it yours you are referring to?