on playing the scratching game by nentwined
15 Sep 2003, 4:56 PM
Lawd knows I knead the hep.
on sitting at the cliff's edge by nentwined
15 Sep 2003, 4:53 PM
Ok, I'm oversurplussed on city traffic. Trade ya for that cliff? Well done. Always good to hear from the Prime Minister.
on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos
15 Sep 2003, 4:47 PM
lapel-grab-haymaker-followthrough. not pulled.
sadness+sadness=sadness
sadness+sadness=sadness
on missing time (revised) by Bill Z Bub
7 Sep 2003, 5:04 PM
I overworked my fish and his eskimo a while ago. It got so bad, I had to put them both down. Don't let it happen to you.
replying on When He's In Me by J.B. Manning
3 Sep 2003, 5:10 AM
You like making strange bedfellows, don't you.
replying on The empty room by INTRANSIT
3 Sep 2003, 4:58 AM
I can dig the comma. I wanted (hair) to rhyme with (there),I was trying a more subtle rhyme with this. I see what you're saying though. I'll play with it.
Oh looky! No more onesies-twosies! I must be gaining the respect of someone with pertinance. Ha! OW! damn that coffee's hot!
Oh looky! No more onesies-twosies! I must be gaining the respect of someone with pertinance. Ha! OW! damn that coffee's hot!
on Nightshades by Bachus
27 Aug 2003, 3:34 PM
Maaaaan, you and them villanelles really know how to get it on!
replying on It's about truckin' by INTRANSIT
27 Aug 2003, 3:28 PM
Why don't you write more? It's great therapy...if nothing else.
replying on What you know by INTRANSIT
27 Aug 2003, 3:19 PM
damn you horus. You're too good. I hadn't even realized how much of myself I had put into this. holy fuck! thanks bro.
So, was it a Monster Mash? Or mashed potatoes.
So, was it a Monster Mash? Or mashed potatoes.
on Portsmouth belle 4 by Garrett S Sexton
26 Aug 2003, 3:07 PM
sweet. sad. dirty. opportunist.
replying on What you know by INTRANSIT
26 Aug 2003, 3:01 PM
I need help with the "face to face" line. any ideas?
replying on What you know by INTRANSIT
26 Aug 2003, 3:00 PM
yep. thanks, the eye turreting is better. obviously you're into reptile husbandry? I miss my 'guana.
on Laundry Day by impert&ent
26 Aug 2003, 6:34 AM
Change the opener. I think the rest is great.
on My Show at the Whiskey a Go Go on the 26th of August 2003 by Jeremi B. Handrinos
26 Aug 2003, 6:25 AM
I'd much rather be there than runnin' this east coast shit! Rock the house, dude!
I'd love to hear n.i.w.s. ! fuck.
I'd love to hear n.i.w.s. ! fuck.
on The Better of the Sea by abecedarian
25 Aug 2003, 5:20 PM
I hate people who write sailing verse better than I. Grrr. I pray... I pray..... something nasty and including a great white whale. I think I've just poxed myself.lol
on POEMRANKER HAT - WHERES MY FREE MUG BITCH? by Don-Quixote
25 Aug 2003, 5:13 PM
You have quelled my grumpiness for the day. Thank you.
replying on What you know by INTRANSIT
23 Aug 2003, 7:45 AM
Thanks. I know there's a lot right, and a lot wrong, here. I'm on the road and gotta keep moving. I'll tweak it for adjustment at a later time.
on quarter-step (abridged) by richa
23 Aug 2003, 7:42 AM
This edges something of a marriage, to me. I would say: Just (ours).
on quarter-step (abridged) by richa
23 Aug 2003, 7:42 AM
This edges something of a marriage, to me. I would say: Just (ours).
on August and everyt'ing after by w~* ATHENA *~w
19 Aug 2003, 6:17 AM
Also, if your appetite is insatiable, why not write more?