on August and everyt'ing after by w~* ATHENA *~w
19 Aug 2003, 5:47 AM
Your style is definitely one-off. maybe two. I need more lines to "clue me in".
replying on Breaking the wind (An Odenelle to Pirgaytes) by Bachus
19 Aug 2003, 5:35 AM
At least you'll be laughing while the rest of us poor slobs......
on the secret life of eyebrows by Bill Z Bub
17 Aug 2003, 8:14 PM
If there's a best poet (overall) award for this site, I'd vote for you. eyebrows, HA! whodathunk.
on Confession of a troubled man by Hostileintent
17 Aug 2003, 5:17 PM
I'll come back. First read looks pretty good.
on missing time (revised) by Bill Z Bub
17 Aug 2003, 4:58 PM
I like the randomly shifted lines better. Dropping the buttercup works! I don't know what perfect is, but I can't imagine it being better than this. you piss me off.
on drought on talkin river by richa
17 Aug 2003, 6:17 AM
nice bridgework.
on The makings of a killer by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Aug 2003, 6:15 AM
Are you already in Lompoc? Did e-mode put you there? bastards.
Yes! How can p/k say your poetry is going nowhere? Honestly, I may not understand most of what you are writing, but you have no boxes. no boundaries. no rules. this is what makes you work. once people get past the wrought iron gates, you're an amusement park with the best rides. always worth the price of admittance.
on drought on talkin river by richa
16 Aug 2003, 5:34 PM
definitely better. i never quite make the jump from 2 to 3 though. holding score.
on Icecream Soul by LuckyJoe
15 Aug 2003, 8:36 PM
good metaphor. needs chutzpah.
on First Love by Mr Pig
15 Aug 2003, 8:35 PM
From kindergarten until mid-high, I hung on any piece of info that she might come back. She never did. I never will.
on The last Smurf standing by Bachus
15 Aug 2003, 5:02 PM
Ok you baaaaad boy. But no more freebies!
on for sue (20030815) by nentwined
15 Aug 2003, 4:55 PM
Bing fucking go!
on whilst the bells ring by richa
15 Aug 2003, 6:20 AM
Time to take your turn at the top. Brilliant.
on Rearview mirrors by horus8
15 Aug 2003, 6:12 AM
Strong message. Mellow tone.
on Happiness & Old Age by Caducus
11 Aug 2003, 5:46 PM
Blue ribbons here!
replying on Maine Freeze by http://mulberryfairy
11 Aug 2003, 5:34 PM
now THAT would get me to go back to Maine.
replying on Sagadahoc to Hudson by http://mulberryfairy
11 Aug 2003, 10:00 AM
Yes, Cheers. You might like "Tingling". It's in my archives. Feel free to snoop.
replying on The Cereal Killer Blues by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 Aug 2003, 7:20 AM
You're a tough act to follow. I'm gonna try just for shoits and giggles. printing.......