replying on He's Dead You Bastards (for zzinia) by scitz
5 Aug 2003, 8:10 PM
Thats right! You'll be buried under enormous piles of CURDS!!!
That's right! I said CURDS!!! By the way, has anyone seen my curds? I thought I left them on the credenza next to my cufflinks.
That's right! I said CURDS!!! By the way, has anyone seen my curds? I thought I left them on the credenza next to my cufflinks.
on The Longest Wait (Revised) by Caducus
5 Aug 2003, 4:31 PM
I prefer your closing line because it seems (she) was a lover or girlfriend. and you're going home to silence or the lack of a second body. I think Zs suggestion would lead me to think "mother".
Croupier? absolutely.
Croupier? absolutely.
on A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom
5 Aug 2003, 4:20 PM
Pinkmeister, This does have potential. It NEEDS to drop the (sentence) structure. and it reepats itself for an ending. It's good to play poet. It's better to back it up with some work.
replying on I, criminal by INTRANSIT
4 Aug 2003, 5:29 PM
posession, ownership of the poem. can you clarify that a little please?
replying on I, criminal by INTRANSIT
4 Aug 2003, 3:43 PM
If I put as much energy into my poetry as I do making a living..... Maybe a definition of ownership might help.
replying on Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Aug 2003, 2:01 PM
eww! gross!!! wash it off first!!!
on Satyrs and fluting the teachers by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Aug 2003, 2:00 PM
worker(s)!
on Satyrs and fluting the teachers by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Aug 2003, 1:58 PM
I, unfortunately, am not the powers that be. Otherwise I'd hand you your poetryc diploma and kick your fucking ass off poemranker!!!!
on Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Aug 2003, 1:30 PM
Hi there! I'm an Apteryx. A wingless bird with hairy feathers! How may I be of assistance?
replying on Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit
3 Aug 2003, 3:40 PM
No. I was just making comment that I can identify with the taking care of someone whose health is ailing towards death.
I'll not jump in the middle again. My apologies, sir.
I'll not jump in the middle again. My apologies, sir.
replying on Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit
3 Aug 2003, 5:17 AM
I can't say that my mothers death was quite as ugly. But I know renal failure IS.
on Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit
2 Aug 2003, 6:14 PM
poetand KOnwit? Boy, I can't wait to see THIS smackdown.
on We'll be Louvers and shade by <{Baba^Yaga}>
31 Jul 2003, 5:29 PM
sit down. you're gonna pull something.
replying on I, criminal by INTRANSIT
31 Jul 2003, 3:08 PM
Just asking.
replying on I, criminal by INTRANSIT
31 Jul 2003, 12:56 PM
Would you happen to know where I might be able to find a first generation Mazda Rx-7 in need of some tlc?
on Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer
31 Jul 2003, 9:16 AM
Loved it! I usually give folks th pinkie. I don't care enough to send the very best.
replying on How it should have happened by INTRANSIT
30 Jul 2003, 6:19 PM
If you are referring to the "keep on keepin' on" phrase, No. I don't hang with any particular "crowd". Yes I'm aware that this sucks. It's my first formal attempt at sex poetry and went horribly limp. to say the least. I should just stay away from this topic poetically . Thanks for your time.
replying on Sonnet for a Suicide by <~>
30 Jul 2003, 7:52 AM
it's not supposed to be this way.
Today is your day bro.
Tonight is your night bro.
Happy 29!!