on some deleted poem
25 Oct 2002, 3:18 AM
Telling, very telling. Good stuff.
on The First Poem by jrtails
25 Oct 2002, 3:36 AM
Nice one, tails - SAFE, MATE!!!!
on My Friend? by Blade
10 Nov 2002, 3:28 PM
Ok, this is just poor. Dude, learn to spell, and don't write any contrived rubbish just to make the lines rhyme. You really need to sort out your act, and please stop spewing that 'daywalker' macho-crap!
on some deleted poem
9 Nov 2002, 8:55 AM
17? The rest of us grunts should feel duly humble. As I said, good stuff - now write something really crap, otherwise the rest of us'll get inferiority complexes!!! Oh, and it's spelt 'naive' - I saw the ?? in stanza 2 and thought I'd clear that one up for you. Again, nicely done, and thanks for someone finally adding a tasteful contribution to this otherwise woeful site!!!!
on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2002, 2:36 AM
Clever, unique style of imagery, and really nicely written. This is good stuff (a change from the usual bigoted, childish drivel we get on this site) - well done!
on A dutch poem (just a joke) by susie
6 Nov 2002, 8:17 AM
Very funny! Much mirth was had with this one!!
on He loves me by susie
6 Nov 2002, 8:19 AM
Nice ideas, and well written - job's a good'un!
on Billie's Threnody by Frass
6 Nov 2002, 6:59 AM
Pretty darn good! I really like the idea of "dusty throated saxophone" - tell me, young sir, do you ever listen to the great tenor saxist Lester Young, 'cos he was close to Lady Day (hell, he came up with that moniker!), appeared on some of her finest cuts, and it just so happens his fabulous tenor sound was the dustiest and warmest sound going (or was that a deliberate point you were making?) Good work, sir - you have style (said he, shuffling off to his record collection with a glass of malt whiskey...)!!
on Wise Clogg! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
6 Nov 2002, 7:07 AM
Poor and inane - 3 points, and only because you did at least include some kind of structure. Oh, and as a professional bebop saxophonist, I implore you to stop embarrasing yourself by displaying the vast gaps in your knowledge - "shoe-be-do-be-do" is utter bollocks. Proper bop scat singing goes something like this:
"Oo-bop-eel-ya-da, bop-sh'bam, a-klook-a-mop". Show some respect, you cock-knocker.
"Oo-bop-eel-ya-da, bop-sh'bam, a-klook-a-mop". Show some respect, you cock-knocker.
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 2:18 AM
Genius. Pure Genius. BRAVO!!!
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 2:31 AM
Hell yeah!!!
on bad boy taylor by rosiebailey
4 Nov 2002, 5:40 AM
Nicely done!!! Jrtails, you iz goin DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
on boy girl by little_angel_maria
28 Oct 2002, 2:37 PM
Clever layout and succinctly put. I agree with zzinnia66, this is one of your best. Good stuff! :)
on Heart of the killer by UAFANTHORPEY
28 Oct 2002, 5:46 AM
Wow! A few typos, but otherwise, well, erm...wow! Spot on!!! :)
on some deleted poem
25 Oct 2002, 8:23 AM
Mirth-inducing stuff! :) Probably makes more sense to someone who is well versed in Greek mythology (like myself - oh, and just as a point of interest, the original, Greek spelling is Heraklez. I don't mean it as a jibe, it's just a little-known fact that I thought might be of interest to you). Excellent stuff (Creme de Menthe AND ancient mythology - I like your style, pal!!!!).
P.S. Anyone who refers to Heraklez as Hercules when talking in an Ancient Greek (as opposed to Roman) context deserves to be hanged, drawn and quartered. Just thought I'd get that one quite clear.....
P.S. Anyone who refers to Heraklez as Hercules when talking in an Ancient Greek (as opposed to Roman) context deserves to be hanged, drawn and quartered. Just thought I'd get that one quite clear.....
on some deleted poem
25 Oct 2002, 3:31 AM
Funny, funny stuff, although you are a pervert of the first degree and need locking up. Still, very funny stuff!
on some deleted poem
25 Oct 2002, 2:57 AM
No offence, but this is utter drivel. Keep your bigoted, homophobic rhetoric to yourself, and do not bring this site into contempt with this brand of poorly-scrawled bullshit ever again!
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 2:05 AM
erm.....ok...
on Limmerick, Starring Andy by MuDvAyNe
25 Oct 2002, 8:30 AM
Nicely done!