on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2003, 2:55 PM
Greatful for what?
on Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe
2 Oct 2003, 1:39 AM
Yes. I findus Thisus Shittus. I can write in Latin!!!
on Angel by abecedarian
6 Aug 2003, 1:45 PM
Bit vague, and lack of capital letters marks it down, some nice imagery though. -6-
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2003, 1:02 AM
Fire is surley my favourite of all four elements.
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2003, 1:09 AM
Yet technically it isn't an organism, it doesn't have organs to be an organism, or tissues, or any cell structure at all. Yet it does fill in all criteria for life:
Reproduction: Fire can make more fire, that's how forest fires start from matches.
Respire: It takes in oxygen.
Grows: It gets larger (although its a bit dodgy, as it doesn't use cell reproduction, specialization or enlargment)
Feeds: What is the wick, or the dry grass if noot food?
Sensitivity: It responds to its environment, gets smaller if there isn't enough oxygen, larger if there is more fuel etc.
Move: Again, I refer you to flash fires in dry areas.
Excrete: Like us, it excretes Carbon Dioxide.
I can't beleieve I just did that. I was shit at science!!!
Reproduction: Fire can make more fire, that's how forest fires start from matches.
Respire: It takes in oxygen.
Grows: It gets larger (although its a bit dodgy, as it doesn't use cell reproduction, specialization or enlargment)
Feeds: What is the wick, or the dry grass if noot food?
Sensitivity: It responds to its environment, gets smaller if there isn't enough oxygen, larger if there is more fuel etc.
Move: Again, I refer you to flash fires in dry areas.
Excrete: Like us, it excretes Carbon Dioxide.
I can't beleieve I just did that. I was shit at science!!!
on The Path of Least Resistance by eliastemplar
11 Sep 2003, 1:17 AM
Sheepish mount - Don Quixote almost. I never thought I'd see basic military training in a poem like this either.
on The Belgian Bookworm [revised] by DreamerSupreme
6 Aug 2003, 1:51 PM
Thoughtful imagery, yeah I like this. A nice contemplation. -7- PS I love Clive Cussler myself.
on -=Dark_Angel=- RAP by poemwanker
4 Aug 2003, 7:03 AM
stunning, visionary and prophetic (I dearly hope). Actually, I heard DA doesn't have a dick. Lost it to a Russian prospector in a grizzly Haiku tournament in Mongolia.
on Paintball's Flight by loneshadow29
4 Aug 2003, 7:06 AM
I got hit on the mask playing paintball once, I stumbled around, into a tree nearly knocking me out, and into the enemies base. My god that was a painful weekend, and as a frequent visitor to dominatris I know real pain. Hmmm, cheese grater on the cock.
on The Farmer's In His Den... by Yardbird
4 Aug 2003, 7:00 AM
Well, since foot and mouth, his wife has left him for the vet who put down all his sheep! He's gotta console himself somehow...
on Clay Man by eliastemplar
4 Aug 2003, 6:48 AM
I like it, provocative images of playing God. Creation vs destruction. As a Marine don't you get the piss ripped out of you for being a poet?
on blue lilac and I (edit) by richa
2 Oct 2003, 1:31 AM
Am I the only one not distinctly moved by this? I mean, a trombone? Seems like there's an oompah band just round the bend and I fund that higly amusing. Images of fat germans in Lederhosen and feathers in their cap spoiling this tranquil scene. It ruins the whole effect. Oboe, clarinet maybe, but trombone, no. There are far more emotive instruments than a trombone. And if this was me, I'd be blasted for the lack of capital letters. I quite like like 'silvered in pike' but pike arn't silver, they're green. Plus you won't find pike in a stream, they're too big, and prefer lakes to running water. They are also carnivorous, so are highly solitary creatures, you'd be lucky to get enough in one place for them to 'silver'. Apart from that there's some great stuff. 7
on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum
2 Oct 2003, 1:35 AM
Pure, unadulterated, feaces. I'd rather do reconstructive surgery on my penis shaft with a rusty pick axe than read this again.
on A London Cafe by mrpresident
2 Oct 2003, 1:50 AM
I like cafes in london too.
on The Western World by mrpresident
2 Oct 2003, 1:51 AM
I hate being western myself. I really wish I was Chinese, or black.
on Livin' With No Momma by DurtKL
2 Oct 2003, 1:54 AM
Yo mommas so fat, when she sunbathes, greenpeace try and roll her back in!!!!
Yo mommas so fat, it takes 3 buses and train to get on her good side!
Yo mommas so fat, she needs an asteroid belt!
Yo mommas so fat, when she wears stilletos, she strikes oil!!!
Yo mommas so fat, when I was fucking her, it took me 7 rolls to get off her!!!
Interesting though...7
Yo mommas so fat, it takes 3 buses and train to get on her good side!
Yo mommas so fat, she needs an asteroid belt!
Yo mommas so fat, when she wears stilletos, she strikes oil!!!
Yo mommas so fat, when I was fucking her, it took me 7 rolls to get off her!!!
Interesting though...7
on The Geek by mrpresident
3 Oct 2003, 1:26 AM
A life story, Mrpresident???? I think so...