poemranker ::20 most recent comments by cleverdevice (141-160)

Comments bycleverdevice, 141–160 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 18 Nov 2002, 1:19 AM
Douglas Adams would be proud! Hillariously funny.
Whats the last thing that goe through a flies head as it hits the windscreen?
Its arse.
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11 Nov 2002, 3:08 AM
Excellent. How can this not get 10s across the board? This must have taken ages to write but its well worth it.
on some deleted poem 18 Nov 2002, 1:15 AM
An excellent moral tale. A new hillaire belloc perhaps?
on some deleted poem 12 Nov 2002, 5:46 AM
Excellent. 'Honey, one of my nipples came off' 'Good God, a mans nipples don't just come of!' 'not true, depends what kind of pliers you use.'
on Sod this! This poem can't rhyme for toffee... by Yardbird 22 Nov 2002, 5:54 AM
Hahahahaha, I know the problem, Dr. Spankenwissenschaften!
on some deleted poem 19 Nov 2002, 2:29 AM
You should make this into a song, it has real blues potential!
on Slow death by Blade 19 Nov 2002, 2:35 AM
I think this is bloody brilliant! Especially as I had most input, didn't I blade? Why did you not recognize my worth and add my name somewhere? Inthe title would be nice. And the alternative title should be 'A long fall'. 10
on some deleted poem 18 Nov 2002, 2:55 AM
Twat. You're the reason some jews still live in fear.
on Sod by jrtails 18 Nov 2002, 1:07 AM
Excellent. Simple is best. Good meaning. Gives interaction with the reader in that it can apply to them and also the huge amount of comments I should imagine are coming your way.(That wasn't like a sinister warning though.)
on Football by Tom Colebrooke 18 Nov 2002, 1:10 AM
A A Milne is spinning in his grave, Back then football was for the rough lower classes. But I reckon I can see your point. I too like football, but compare it to tubs of cheap margarine! Hmmmmmmmmm, Stork.
on Few Words by Tom Colebrooke 18 Nov 2002, 1:11 AM
Fraid not old chap. Damm matrons tied me up stripped naked in the boiler room. Bet you went to a public school now eh! Oh hello matron. Gosh those stockings look nice on you!
on I Cry by casey 18 Nov 2002, 1:14 AM
Very emotionally wrought. And optimisim too, I like optimisim in a poem. Too many people think a poem has to be all depressing and sad to be hard hitting, but you prove it doesn't.
on some deleted poem 18 Nov 2002, 1:16 AM
Where do sausage rolls feature in this?
on The Washing by strider1 18 Nov 2002, 2:58 AM
I think this is discrminiatory to all washing machines everywhere, will tumble driers be next? For gods sake is it that bad?
on Surreal... by Yardbird 13 Nov 2002, 2:40 AM
An excellent sonnet. Just like the great bards, 'tis indecipherable and incomprehensable. Well done.
on Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird 13 Nov 2002, 2:39 AM
Very good, I'm thinking incompetent yanks are to blame. Theres a story behind this. Do tell us some day.
on boy girl by little_angel_maria 11 Nov 2002, 2:58 AM
I've been told by Blade to support him on this one. Its true though, there isn't enough respect for one anothers work. Maybe we don't like it for one reason or another but its only an opinion and no-one can prove an opinion right or wrong. Ever. But yeah, go Blade. (You've mad her all self-defensive now with that ridiculously long numbered comment. Keep it up!)
on A Little Life by Tom Colebrooke 18 Nov 2002, 1:08 AM
Excellent. I love innane fun poems.
on boy girl by little_angel_maria 11 Nov 2002, 3:01 AM
When the dad comes does he actually 'come'? That makes it more meaningful probably.
on Damn you, Mary Poppins... by Yardbird 22 Nov 2002, 5:44 AM
This works well, methinks.