on Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird
13 Nov 2002, 2:39 AM
Very good, I'm thinking incompetent yanks are to blame. Theres a story behind this. Do tell us some day.
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Nov 2002, 3:08 AM
Excellent. How can this not get 10s across the board? This must have taken ages to write but its well worth it.
on boy girl by little_angel_maria
11 Nov 2002, 3:01 AM
When the dad comes does he actually 'come'? That makes it more meaningful probably.
on boy girl by little_angel_maria
11 Nov 2002, 2:58 AM
I've been told by Blade to support him on this one. Its true though, there isn't enough respect for one anothers work. Maybe we don't like it for one reason or another but its only an opinion and no-one can prove an opinion right or wrong. Ever. But yeah, go Blade. (You've mad her all self-defensive now with that ridiculously long numbered comment. Keep it up!)
on The ballad of woosie by rosiebailey
7 Nov 2002, 6:15 AM
My old geography teacher was an Oompah Loompah, I swear. He also thought that steam is a gas. Is it? On reflection it may be a form of plasma as it is a liquid acting like a gas. Much like flour is a plasma as it is a solid acting as a liquid and did you know that glass is a liquid?
on why i look like a man by rosiebailey
7 Nov 2002, 6:11 AM
Wow, reminds me of an earlier poem no longer with us.
Why?
Oh why?
Must I live this lie?
But I won't die
And go to the sky
And eat this pie
In my tie
Dye-
D Jeans.
Why?
Oh why?
Must I live this lie?
But I won't die
And go to the sky
And eat this pie
In my tie
Dye-
D Jeans.
on Dead Poets' Society (Joke) by Yardbird
7 Nov 2002, 6:08 AM
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAAAAAA! It rocks! Here is a philosophy poem. (The two are iinexplicably entwined)
Ever heard of the solipsism campaign for support?
Ever heard of the solipsism campaign for support?
on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman
7 Nov 2002, 6:05 AM
Brilliant! This should be the goddam best poem! Its teenage life.
on The Gunfighter by deadstar
6 Nov 2002, 4:46 AM
I like this a lot, its very original.
on Innocence lost by deadstar
6 Nov 2002, 4:44 AM
Very symbolic of current events should Bush have his way. Sad news just in, Congress is Republican! Bush is unstoppable. Clinton had an IQ of 186, Bush's is 92! Where did it all go wrong? (apart from a certain secretary)
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
6 Nov 2002, 4:15 AM
And people blame me for being immature! Its sick.
replying on Angels by Reuben Spiteri
5 Nov 2002, 3:29 AM
(Sorry I had to use you as an example.)
on Angels by Reuben Spiteri
5 Nov 2002, 3:28 AM
Hmm, cliched, shallow, meaningless. Only joking. Unlike some of the bastards here I think all poetry is good as long as it means something to the author.
on Got Balls? by Yardbird
4 Nov 2002, 2:12 AM
Hannibal Lecter would be irate!
on The First Poem by jrtails
27 Oct 2002, 6:22 AM
HAHAHA! Excellent.
on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird
25 Oct 2002, 3:25 AM
Great! Well done.