Poemranker [20 most recent comments by BrandonW and replies]

replying on I Hope by BrandonW 7 Oct 2007, 8:09 PM

i sometimes find it hard to deviate from writing the 100% spot-on factual truth about some events.. hell, even for the sake of the piece.. this just being another example of that.. coming to the end of my thoughts all i could do was let it be and hope that there was some truth in what i was saying.. i hope

on For Gillian Park by Caducus 24 Dec 2005, 8:52 AM

fuckin' great if you ask me!

replying on I Remember Thinking by BrandonW 14 Dec 2005, 10:01 PM

Well, its all pretty much straight forward.. I don't see how you got lost.. But anyways, those lines are just random thoughts that 'I remebered thinking'.. I don't feel I need then to convey the message.. maybe I'll think about keeping only what is needed.

on Thespian by BrandonW 5 Dec 2005, 9:46 PM

If the haiku form limits the story... what about 4 of them?

replying on Shoebox Thoughts by BrandonW 5 Dec 2005, 9:12 PM

I think "quaintly demented" is a nice way to put it.. I hate that no one likes haikus! I don't know if it's just lack of talent or laziness.. but I write tons of the damn things!

replying on Shoebox Thoughts by BrandonW 4 Dec 2005, 9:45 PM

That kinda has 18 syllables....

replying on A Joining Of Souls (edit) by Caducus 2 Dec 2005, 7:27 PM

I agree...

on Thunder by dooley 1 Dec 2005, 3:00 PM

Can someone please explain to me why this is good?

replying on Chills by BrandonW 1 Dec 2005, 2:54 PM

Yeah.. I don't usually like to write about drugs.. religon is hard get away from.. guess it's a Southern thing.. heh, I've actually been waiting for a reason to use 'insufflation' in a poem. I thought it worked well.. thanks

replying on Chills by BrandonW 1 Dec 2005, 2:50 PM

I should have known.. it was the one line I wasn't sure about and the one line I settled on.. I'm sure I could come up with a better line.. I was just anxious to post it.. next time I'll know better

on On The First Night by OneFingerAnswer 30 Nov 2005, 10:27 PM

Fuck.. I like it.. its sweet.. and I like it -9

on The Bus by Dovina 30 Nov 2005, 8:57 PM

I like the idea.. I get images of molecular hitchhikers riding a comet to earth.. then.. I don't know that I like bred, sped, bled, fed.. and.. in saying, "All the children know the ancient honored bus", are you saying that everyone has their own explanation for why we are here? Anyways, I think the last 3 are the strongest.. -7

on Virtue and Sin by dooley 30 Nov 2005, 8:38 PM

I'm confused.. there is "I".. and there is the girl.. there is "I" again.. then a writer, low men, a snake, and raccoon.. then back to the girl and another guy, who apparently is a knight.. then back to the damn snake..

on Low by wilco 30 Nov 2005, 6:43 PM

Do you have any music or chords worked out for this? I put some chords to it.. and it doesnt sound bad.. - 7

on listen by elderking 30 Nov 2005, 6:33 PM

8 - I likes...

replying on Picking Up Sins by BrandonW 30 Nov 2005, 2:35 PM

I like the fact that he not unly used cock, but that he referred to it as his "ready cock"... now theres a difference! It was ready for something!

replying on Picking Up Sins by BrandonW 29 Nov 2005, 6:01 PM

replying on Games by BrandonW 29 Nov 2005, 3:13 PM

Hah, I'd never edited a poem before. I had no clue....

replying on Silent Night by Dovina 29 Nov 2005, 3:08 PM

Led around by his what?

replying on Picking Up Sins by BrandonW 29 Nov 2005, 1:41 PM

I'm done with the flirting for now.. But it got me a 9! I see how this place works! Thanks..