poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Caducus (101-120)

Comments byCaducus, 101–120 back. Include replies

on Hoi Polloi by INTRANSIT 29 Dec 2005, 4:18 AM
Cute observation.
on why? by nentwined 29 Dec 2005, 4:19 AM
no crimson?
on For Love of Baseball by Dovina 29 Dec 2005, 4:32 AM
I like the end it wraps it up well
on Memoirs of a miners son by Caducus 29 Dec 2005, 7:33 AM
Line 3 should i say: he drew his breaths like a miners pick

instead of heroes sword?

Its a draft for sure but thanks cldtrucky
on Crowded by INTRANSIT 29 Dec 2005, 7:35 AM
wordplay maestro :_)
on He Looks Great In Lycra by GAY AS FU*K 10 Jan 2006, 9:33 AM
What a talent
on the sky chooses blue by <~> 12 Jan 2006, 9:18 AM
love kneescrape clarity - prayer like.
Clarity.
on Photograph by <~> 12 Jan 2006, 9:20 AM
From my loft i found all my pictures and schoolwork from near age zero and reading this the day after prologed the feeling of '5' ....Line 3 was mine once too.
on Flow by zodiac 12 Jan 2006, 9:22 AM
Three different images of flow and damn good ones to boot.

on Intestinal Splash by cyan9 12 Jan 2006, 9:23 AM
Good but stanza 4 for me makes it tiresome, too biological, out of synch.
on The funeral and the table by Caducus 13 Jan 2006, 6:49 AM
Formerly another poem altogether. A change of style nad experimental for me here and suggestions (if any) most welcome.
on Brogues are best by Stephen Robins 13 Jan 2006, 6:51 AM
A similar style to Dark Angel and pretty amusing.

Are you related?
on A tribute to our most precious Pearl by amanda_dcosta 18 Jan 2006, 8:40 AM
Dont know the history of the drafts but dont care its one of those poems which moves me.

That rarely happens.
on Racism 4 by Dovina 18 Jan 2006, 8:42 AM
Stanza on eand three very solid. The end borders jerry springer final thought though.
on some deleted poem 18 Jan 2006, 8:45 AM
Last 5 lines are beautiful and the repetition of "drown yourself" is very effective. Reminds me of Jonathan Morley a poet from Warwick University in England who does a lot of open Mic and who's work is kickin some anorak ass in cov.
on some deleted poem 25 Jan 2006, 8:32 AM
I felt like washing after writing it.

I know someone this happened to too and realized you cant get close to someone closed - not completely anyway.
on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT 25 Jan 2006, 7:33 AM
Different in style from you and the wit mixes well with the wisdom. I think the link from poin tot point needs a tidy though (example: their secret dimples until
the lightbulb is
screwed in
Szechuan

Some novel lines / expression use in this.
on A moment, homeward by ecargo 25 Jan 2006, 7:35 AM
Sonnet like and an eye debut from you to me. Good first impression
on Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus 27 Jan 2006, 7:46 AM
whatever i do i still think this need san edit
on The correct order of things by Stephen Robins 1 Feb 2006, 1:46 AM
Cool satire and how you view those who view different parts of society was done really well. Reminded me of hte Blur parklife album with its wit yet their was a sense of humor mixed in with acute observations.

Is this Dark Angel inspired? or are you not one of his many aka's?