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25-Nov-02/8:26 AM |
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kerBLAM! Oh shit, my head's just exploded.
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| Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus |
26-Nov-02/2:12 AM |
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| Re: Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore |
26-Nov-02/1:34 AM |
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So which twats gave it 0?
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| Re: Liar by Goose |
26-Nov-02/1:12 AM |
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Wow, Bachus must really like you.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Nov-02/1:08 AM |
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I like this poem-although the title doesn't really work. Something like 'Wraith' would be closer...
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25-Nov-02/8:24 AM |
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You got his name right-but that's about all
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| Re: Johannesburg 2002 by Blue Magpie |
26-Nov-02/2:19 AM |
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This is brilliant. I can't fault this at all. Oh, except is it "They pay you *to* lie" (line 17)? Eleven out of ten
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26-Nov-02/2:26 AM |
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This sort of thing makes me wish I was a real poet so that I could look deeper into people's thoughts. This is a really good poem.
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26-Nov-02/2:28 AM |
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!!!!!
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| Re: Maliced flame by T'ien |
26-Nov-02/1:04 AM |
Actually, considering the state of mind he's in right now, I think it sums up everything pretty well.
It needs a bit of work, but hey, so does almost everything
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| Re: Cocky by Goose |
26-Nov-02/1:06 AM |
Bachus: Error line 1-'AN Sagittarius' should be 'A Sagittarius'
Decent poem.
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| Re: love song by <~> |
26-Nov-02/1:25 AM |
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I play the cello, so I should know. It's a damn good effort considering the restrictions on the artistic abilities of this site. This is nearly perfect. 10/10
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| Re: love song by <~> |
26-Nov-02/1:26 AM |
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By the way, when I say 'artistic' I mean 'drawing'...just in case anyone thought I was talking about the standard of the poetry.
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26-Nov-02/1:41 AM |
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And I thought it was just Dark Angel who wanted to get the worst poem by upsetting people. How naive of me...
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
26-Nov-02/1:48 AM |
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Sorry for using 'cain't'...just couldn't resist using the ol' Southern accent (even though I'm English). Oh no, I'd better run:-I think I can hear Maria...
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26-Nov-02/2:01 AM |
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| Re: Angel by Mutant_X |
26-Nov-02/2:03 AM |
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Do you listen to Santana a lot?
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| Re: realities <from above their brilliance is short-lived> by royalflesh |
26-Nov-02/2:05 AM |
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I don't know if I like this or not. Like the 'Mississippi mud sky', though.
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| Re: Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria |
26-Nov-02/1:11 AM |
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
26-Nov-02/1:46 AM |
There once was a young man called Blade
Who's poems were crap and depraved
His poems ain't swell
Because he cain't spell
That uneducated young man called Blade
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