| Re: The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer |
5-Feb-03/12:28 PM |
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| Re: The Grapes of Wrath by ==Doylum |
5-Feb-03/12:25 PM |
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Not as good as Harry Potter but still worthy of a nine! Keep it up!
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| Re: Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum |
5-Feb-03/12:23 PM |
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I've not laughed this much for ages. You may have a nine, no wait, this is the best parody yet and it's not a haiku, here's a laughter filled ten!
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| Re: The Marble Jar & the new boy, Primrose Avenue, Yesteryear. by ==Doylum |
5-Feb-03/12:19 PM |
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| Re: Charles and Eddie by Nicholas Jones |
5-Feb-03/12:17 PM |
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Whoaaaa, weird at first...I think in my confusion I'll give an 8
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| Re: An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
5-Feb-03/12:12 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger |
5-Feb-03/12:09 PM |
Not only are you a sarcastic bastard, you also make no sense. What are you talking about? Grimm one and Grimm two probably wouldn't say a thing about this poem, mainly because they're dead. How could you have (note that it should be 'have', not 'of') ever doubted me what? What the fuck are you on about? Please explain. Also please explain the whole Brit poppers thing.
Sooo...that over, what is so bad with this one as to warrant it a zero, may I be so bold as to ask? You don't seem to like any style other than your own, is that all that's wrong with this? Or is it really a huge pile of shit? Huh? Huh?
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| Re: Slow motion by INTRANSIT |
1-Feb-03/11:08 PM |
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Has a lot of potential, mr intransit. Keep going, though, I agree with the above comment, it does need a bit more.
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| Re: Run Forest! Run... by Bachus |
1-Feb-03/9:29 AM |
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This is by far your best work!!!
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| Re: Spring Delight by Teen14 |
1-Feb-03/9:28 AM |
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Lovely. Spring rolls as well (I'm shamelessly self-promoting).
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| Re: Impossibilities, and Marvel Comical Heroes. by Bachus |
1-Feb-03/9:26 AM |
Wowee wow! Fun fun fun!
Is it only a third of Americans that believe that?
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| Re: The Merry Man by Teen14 |
1-Feb-03/9:24 AM |
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| Re: a comment on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
31-Jan-03/1:05 PM |
Have you read any of Caducus' poems? Try "Sawn off shotgun blues", or "Quarry of the Devil and Croupier". His is not teen angst.
You're right about Blade, though.
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| Re: Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin |
31-Jan-03/1:02 PM |
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| Re: Lovers Game by scitz |
31-Jan-03/12:58 PM |
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Pretty good. sado-masochism I believe has a wossname, hyphon type thing in between.
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| Re: Despair by Caducus |
31-Jan-03/12:56 PM |
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Caducus, perhaps you should split it up so that the 'forgive me's are in seperate stanzas from the rest? It might add a little to the structure.
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| Re: All I Feel by brokenwing |
31-Jan-03/12:52 PM |
'Fluorescent'
Like the poem, it is one of your best.
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| Re: a comment on unsent by Bill Z Bub |
31-Jan-03/12:50 PM |
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Friends are what we'll always be? Something like that? Ah well. Still like it.
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| Re: A Little Nightmare by Teen14 |
31-Jan-03/12:47 PM |
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Bold, straight to the point although I still don't know what the nightmare is.
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| Re: Elegy by Quarton |
31-Jan-03/12:45 PM |
Yep, I like it-it's a lyric, not a free verse as far as I can see. Good stuff.
If you read my latest attempt you'll see that Icarus doesn't need his wings, he's got a plane.
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