Some good stuff in here, i especially like the last verse.
Perhaps needs tightening a bit it becomes a bit prosaic in the middle

ok gets its point across
but stands as a list rather than a poem i think

ok insomnia with cicada is a good rhyme
perhaps a few less big words, they tend to be heavily loaded which impedes original communication

have you changed this?
I prefer it today
perhaps it is the mirror

why the queen mum of england?

thanks for the reference

i haven't ranked this
i don't think that was the point
(some people obviously do)

I like the structure, very inventive

interesting set out,
It can be read as a single line,
Very sweet sentiment

'all men are pigs' after she said that did you introduce yourself (as mr pig) ?

very sweet poem as ever, moving in images

I like it
quite despairing

zippy piece
I'm glad you get the story across without too many references
It'd just make me feel ignorant

abortion is in the air today

never know how to write song lyrics
This is a good stab

perhaps an incendiary line or too to spice it up?

A couple of nice lines
reads more like a mission statement than a poem though

It is said we saw several entirely new verbal constructions a day
Try putting a few in your writing
please

I like rap wordplay but it sometimes seems a bit freestyle and craftless

A haiku however is a good compromise

ok, expresses itself well but I think using more basic elements of language might help it
And the rhymes are so sharp they seem a bit forced

yes very evocative

menacing use of language!

cool, kind of impressionist