poemranker ::20 most recent comments by razorgrin (501-520)

Comments byrazorgrin, 501–520 back. Include replies

on The Funnyman by Christof 1 Nov 2002, 6:47 AM
I really dig the last two lines. They totally bring it all together.
on boy girl by little_angel_maria 28 Oct 2002, 1:11 PM
I agree with Dark Angel on this one.
Damn, it takes a bit to get a smile out of me at this icky hour, but here I am, grinning. Reminds me of the vegan "commie" anarkids here with Che t-shirts, suede sandals and a new cellphione.
awesome.
on Avetis by KilIluminati 31 Oct 2002, 2:26 PM
"u" suck, as does this poeme. If it was spelled right and you took out about 40 of those fnords ,maybe it wouldn't make me want to vomit. Oh well. That will remain a mystery for the ages.
on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2002, 1:04 PM
mmm...moping. Deee-lightful and spookalicious. could use the word "dank' though.
on Inside by Jagang 28 Oct 2002, 1:08 PM
Kill yourself. Pleeease. Believe me, the world would be better without you and no one would miss you.
on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2002, 1:10 PM
wow, such an educated comment, jagang. you must be a real tough poete full of Real Pain (tm).
on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles 28 Oct 2002, 1:20 PM
Robo-batman, eh? Now that's what I'm talkin' about. The best of both worlds in a robo-riffic package.
on Emptiness by Jagang 28 Oct 2002, 1:07 PM
Slitting your wrists is for self-pitying wussies. Play in a minefield. Dump gasoline on yourself and light a match. Passionately embrace a chainsaw. Poem sucks ass as well.
on Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl 28 Oct 2002, 6:56 AM
so do I, shadow. However, I am an autotheist. God's wife: out of curiosity, which capt. howdy? that has been shin-bojangles' other alias since the name came to him in a dream years ago.
on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles 28 Oct 2002, 7:06 AM
hey, I was expecting some batman haiku by now. Less hate, more robots. or batman.
on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2002, 7:03 AM
holy crucifuck, Batman! This is exactly the kind of writing that makes a good case for censorship. I hereby declare, from this day forth: No more poemes by sappy bratling 15-year-olds. So mote it be.
yaaaargh! the crap!
on Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl 24 Oct 2002, 12:09 PM
Indeed it was.
on scotty dog by rosiebailey 24 Oct 2002, 2:10 PM
what the god?
I'm bored. that's seconds I can't ever get back.
on some deleted poem 24 Oct 2002, 12:02 PM
Feckin' beautiful. (right?) quality wit.
on I can't write by Mutant_X 28 Oct 2002, 6:58 AM
Well, at least the title's honest. I guess I brought it on myself to read this shash, then.0.
on ... by logun2002ya 30 Oct 2002, 6:51 AM
I'm not sure of the word you're thinking of, limonade, to describe this one, but I'd use "pukeypoo".