on Hidden Meaning by thepinkbunnyofdoom
21 Feb 2003, 6:38 AM
Good start. please take it somewhere. otherwise good.
on Crucifixion by Mr Pig
21 Feb 2003, 6:35 AM
mighty good. clever.
on Eros, and Psycho by horus8
21 Feb 2003, 6:34 AM
peculiar. i can dig it.
replying on Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin
20 Feb 2003, 10:53 AM
Yay, love! glad you're happy. Thank being tired from staying up reading Naked Lunch. You should see the drawings I did after I finished writing.
replying on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
20 Feb 2003, 10:51 AM
thanks.
on Weekend at the Taj by <~>
19 Feb 2003, 1:27 PM
Fantastic. just fantastic.
replying on Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin
19 Feb 2003, 1:26 PM
i'm all smiley and proud. I'm doing my "shy modest grin" I picked up from some Japanese girls I knew.
replying on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
19 Feb 2003, 1:24 PM
The other two were difficult to explain without desending into mere vulgarity. I like the effect of leaving things a little suggestive.
replying on Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin
19 Feb 2003, 6:40 AM
yay! thank you lots. this is why I wrote these, to make others full of glee. And to fill time in my 'Historical Reactions to Deviance' class.
replying on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
19 Feb 2003, 6:25 AM
Thank you. i liked the last one best as well.
on Highlights From a Conversation at the Laundromat by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 1:54 PM
Nice story, good use of a moral. Solid.
on Atonement by aperfecttool77
18 Feb 2003, 1:51 PM
I'm sorry you were conceived, mr.tool. I speak that utterly sincerely. the world would be just a little sunnier if not only that poeme, but you and everything connected to you didn't exist. BOO! Boo-urns!
replying on On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 1:49 PM
I would sell that guy next to me's soul for a roast beef sandwich right now.
replying on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
18 Feb 2003, 1:47 PM
It is a sexual slang term as well. Could be 'quailing'. I don't want to look it up either way, so it shall remain a mystery.
on On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 1:35 PM
I'm sorry.
on On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 10:46 AM
You can eat the kids too. Use the same recipes as for pork, but apparently the palms of the hands are particularly good fried. On the whole, though, you can't go wrong with stir-frying. NEVER eat human brains, though.
on Options (Senryu) by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 10:44 AM
Delightful.
on Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
18 Feb 2003, 10:42 AM
Groovin'. Chive-tastic. All I get is the drunk/junkie homeless doing their thing in the graveyard across the street from my place. Maybe I should offer chives?
on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
18 Feb 2003, 10:32 AM
Well, I'm amused. Soap-droppingly good.
on Forbidden Fruit by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Feb 2003, 6:38 AM
This needs work."Curse my name on public streets" is a good line, however, the one that follows makes me think of obscene phone calls.