replying on Perversions by razorgrin
28 Nov 2002, 4:30 PM
heavens! You should get that looked at. professionally, this time.
on Friend by MysticalRaven88
28 Nov 2002, 11:43 AM
hey guys, know what? the poem this is attached to sucks moose balls.
on IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria
28 Nov 2002, 11:39 AM
The purpose of this site is to submit your poetry to be critiqued and voted upon. it's not a support group for whiny brats who don't have any real problems. If she writes a piece of utter shite, then she'll get the votes and comments that go along with it. if she wants group hugs, she may take her shit elsewhere.
on IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria
27 Nov 2002, 1:22 PM
nobody cares. seriously. tell it to him instead instead of cluttering up the site with your bullshit. Wait until you have real problems, kiddo. they exist. even worse than boyfriends and pimples. until then, 0.
on Come Night time by anitawit
27 Nov 2002, 1:19 PM
cool.
on This is Me by MysticalRaven88
27 Nov 2002, 1:12 PM
it's like aril lavigne, but even shittier. How exactly is this good poetry?
on two poles are better than one by <~>
27 Nov 2002, 1:06 PM
thoroughly good.
on The Weaver's Curse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
27 Nov 2002, 7:08 AM
the loom looms. i cower in shivery fear. fun.
on Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88
27 Nov 2002, 7:03 AM
listen to zzin and p&K, melinda. invest in some eyeliner, clearasil and fishnets now so you'll be all stocked up.
replying on Friend by MysticalRaven88
27 Nov 2002, 6:57 AM
"she", not "he", buttfuck." thenagian"? you say " thenagian" and call me retarded? This is typical adoloescent slush and nothing more. I calls 'em like i sees 'em.
on This is Me by MysticalRaven88
26 Nov 2002, 2:48 PM
I see you. I'm not very impressed. those pants make your butt look fat.
on Friend by MysticalRaven88
26 Nov 2002, 2:47 PM
is english not your first language? If it is,then you have an excuse for this atrocity of a poeme.
on Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88
26 Nov 2002, 2:45 PM
stop whining and learn to spell, kid.
on Damn chickens by ciantu
26 Nov 2002, 11:36 AM
they can also break a man's leg with one mighty tail swipe. komodo dragons are my favourite critters after kitties and spiders.
on Damn chickens by ciantu
26 Nov 2002, 11:29 AM
chickens is yummy critters.
replying on A meeting at Maverick, then dinner. by <{Baba^Yaga}>
26 Nov 2002, 11:27 AM
my house is full of spiders as it is. they will have to do.
on Small Town Snow by OneFingerAnswer
26 Nov 2002, 11:23 AM
yep, that's a small town alright. cool.
replying on Perversions by razorgrin
26 Nov 2002, 11:18 AM
thank you. i take a bow, guarding my ass from the midgets in leather.
on Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria
25 Nov 2002, 1:04 PM
Oh the trials of being a kid. wait till real life shows up. Craig david blows bishops for bus fare and walks home.
on A meeting at Maverick, then dinner. by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Nov 2002, 12:58 PM
wench-a-riffic. i wish i had a tarantula.