poemranker ::20 most recent comments by razorgrin (441-460) and replies

Comments byrazorgrin, 441–460 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on The Abyss of myself by ciantu 25 Nov 2002, 6:54 AM
naughty=fun, though.
on Beginning or End? by xdarkxangelx24 25 Nov 2002, 6:51 AM
it's the end. unless you're a pansy horizontally slitting his wrists for attention.
on Bacchus and the Ivy by <{Baba^Yaga}> 25 Nov 2002, 6:49 AM
cool.
on hallway by blackball 25 Nov 2002, 6:33 AM
I like it.
replying on All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl 22 Nov 2002, 6:39 AM
Nice words, but they don't fit together all that well, which is why it feels incoherent and bumpy. I've never been that huge on IP, as a rule. but that's just me.
I wanted to see it.
on American Poem by ASTRO-GLIDE 22 Nov 2002, 6:17 AM
holy crap. this made my bowels hurt. unpleasantly.
on Damn you, Mary Poppins... by Yardbird 22 Nov 2002, 6:12 AM
nice.
replying on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}> 21 Nov 2002, 11:14 AM
Snuggy-butt, though I am many things, I am not angry. All of my anger is focused on another target, so all everything else gets is my mirth and youthful glee. Limonade says hi, and she misses you.
on Emptiness by Jagang 21 Nov 2002, 11:09 AM
but of course they would p&k, as I am beloved and revered by legions!
on Emptiness by Jagang 20 Nov 2002, 1:28 PM
I re-read this to see if it was as bad as I remember. yep. you know, if you killed yourself, no one would miss you.
replying on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}> 20 Nov 2002, 1:26 PM
I haven't given him all 10's though, which you, in your infinite journalist perception, failed to see me announce in my last thingy. I would be the butt of your jokes if you were funny. but you're not. You just keep trying to be witty, condescending and intelligent-sounding, but you always come off sounding like an utter twit. Because you are a smaller-than-a-breadbox ninny, I take no honour that you think you bestow upon me. I'll give limonade your message though, i'm sure you'll warm her heart.
replying on Chuds in the mall by razorgrin 20 Nov 2002, 1:15 PM
bite me, churlish crab-louse. you're just all pissy because I said your poems are crap. Still as articulate as always, i see.
on All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl 20 Nov 2002, 7:20 AM
unpleasantly bumpy rhythm and pretty incoherent too. ick.
replying on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl 20 Nov 2002, 7:18 AM
"it's good ,really, you just can't read it right!" Please. If you don't want to be critiqued, go to a different website.I hear "grouphugsforpoets.com" is good. Many of your faults have been pointed out. Also, thoughI can't speak for all present, I can honestly say I don't care for you.
actually, p&k, I haven't given shin all 10s. outside of this artificial environment, i also help edit his other work. Don't assume things, it makes you look foolish.
on my goat by joey 20 Nov 2002, 7:03 AM
i like goats. they're cute.
on The Sea by Moss 20 Nov 2002, 7:02 AM
I'm liking the bit about the barnacles.
on Time to Kill by Shin-Bojangles 19 Nov 2002, 11:11 AM
priceless. even (dare i say it?)gorptacular. I'm all smiley and stuff. remins me of a Kliban cartoon.
on Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones 19 Nov 2002, 11:08 AM
i like gaelic better.