poemranker ::20 most recent comments by daniella (221-240) and replies

Comments bydaniella, 221–240 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Gone Away by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:23 PM
my heart murmurs
in the ticking away,
roundabout clockwise.
on Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:20 PM
when the steam dissipates, me thinks he will remain pondering his rippling flesh, looking no deeper than his bones.
on Noblesse Oblige by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:15 PM
this could be a film, for its 24xsecond imaging in my eye. keep rolling.
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:13 PM
a tribute to all us rankers. i etched somewhere near the heart and diaphragm.
on Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit 19 Oct 2002, 10:10 PM
how the angst gets top rank in our darkened nights. waiting for the light and day to pronounce victorious over all of us.
on Old Man Me by OneFingerAnswer 19 Oct 2002, 10:08 PM
no time to lament!
on The Hand of God by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:05 PM
how we try to image Him into our humanity.... He is always ready, are we willing?
replying on She Thinks Of Men Waiting by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:02 PM
surely she waits for you? hunched over her fags, yellow-fingered twisting anticipation if not for her disillusionment. you took her picture and left her waiting there. perfect move.
replying on cornered invitation by daniella 19 Oct 2002, 9:58 PM
so there it is. squatting in the blitzgrieg of our over-sexed way of going about love. who would have thought we had a gentle side, after all that has been written down and done.
replying on cornered invitation by daniella 19 Oct 2002, 9:56 PM
write on the nail! sometimes i think i have been possessed, othertimes i possess...
on On the Swings by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 9:51 PM
hmmm a playful warning/promise towards oblivion or bliss?!
on The Thought Of It by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 9:45 PM
pure imagery, sends me back to memories. fine and true.
replying on simple silence by daniella 19 Oct 2002, 9:43 PM
nothing could be finer than to take into account words from whom they came. my favorite poets here watching me as i watch back in admiration.
on Recess by horus8 14 Oct 2002, 9:59 PM
i hear strings and a drum. i still have sand on my scuffed knees. took me back indeed.
on IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8 2 Sep 2002, 1:22 PM
class. class. claaaassss.
SHUT UP.
on {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8 2 Sep 2002, 1:15 PM
true to self
i could love this man
i am falling in love with this man
on Wondering Eyes by Holden 4 Aug 2002, 6:33 PM
sweet believing.
on Silent Company by Holden 4 Aug 2002, 6:22 PM
you speak to audience of One!