poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Robert K Foster (281-300)

Comments byRobert K Foster, 281–300 back. Include replies

on Salt by <~> 14 Aug 2002, 8:57 AM
Nicely Done.
on Smaller by Modulo 14 Aug 2002, 9:33 AM
nice sound
on Clit by unknown 14 Aug 2002, 9:32 AM
the title ruined this "poem", but the last line doomed it to be recognized as an obvious attempt at perverted silliness.
on Eleemosynary for the undeserving but forward foreigner by ErgoErgun 14 Aug 2002, 9:05 AM
what has been raped here is the art form of Haiku. Are you trying to piss off the japanese?
on #7 by mikejedw 14 Aug 2002, 9:09 AM
the only part I'd say doesn't fit is the word "inhaled"...
on Birth by DevilTmptrss 14 Aug 2002, 9:12 AM
traditional and sweet. nicely done.
on High? Coo... by Modulo 14 Aug 2002, 9:19 AM
I suggest getting rid of the title. it takes away from your poem, and (traditionally) haiku are untitled.
on Fireflies by mikejedw 14 Aug 2002, 9:38 AM
dull yet contemporary
on Haiku by Cha no Onna 14 Aug 2002, 9:16 AM
may work better as freeform--the images are nice.