on a haiku for all you traditionalists, and after you're done reading it you can eat my shorts by bondjedi
23 May 2003, 11:26 AM
made me laugh. 8
on Kentucky Fried Fun by bondjedi
23 May 2003, 11:25 AM
vile.
on infection of birth by T'ien
23 May 2003, 11:21 AM
haiku?
on new year's eve by razorgrin
23 May 2003, 11:06 AM
5
7
4
7
4
on Little Green Man by BleedingRose
23 May 2003, 11:05 AM
how silly.
on Japanese nature. by daniella
23 May 2003, 11:04 AM
cute.
on Death by dougsoderstrom
23 May 2003, 11:03 AM
3
7
10
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7
10
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on An enchillada called revenge! by horus8
23 May 2003, 11:02 AM
A block or wedge placed under something else, such as a wheel, to keep it from moving.
Nautical. A heavy fitting of metal or wood with two jaws curving inward, through which a rope or cable may be run.
tr.v. chocked, chock·ing, chocks
To fit with or secure by a chock: The plane's wheels were chocked and chained down.
Nautical. To place (a boat) on chocks.
adv.
As close as possible: had to stand chock up against the railing.
I am confused. very confused.
Nautical. A heavy fitting of metal or wood with two jaws curving inward, through which a rope or cable may be run.
tr.v. chocked, chock·ing, chocks
To fit with or secure by a chock: The plane's wheels were chocked and chained down.
Nautical. To place (a boat) on chocks.
adv.
As close as possible: had to stand chock up against the railing.
I am confused. very confused.
on Pro Forma by Jeremi B. Handrinos
23 May 2003, 11:00 AM
lose the punctuation, it disrupts the flow.
on Hippy chic under the bleachers by Shardik
23 May 2003, 11:00 AM
having sex under the bleachers is NOT making love. it is fucking. get it straight. nothing wrong with fucking.
on Fuckface by poemwanker
23 May 2003, 10:57 AM
somewhat clever, but what is with the title?
on Head and Shoulders by Jeremi B. Handrinos
23 May 2003, 10:49 AM
its the acid they put in it, eating away at your skin like chemlawn does to dandelions.
on 2 Haiku by Blindproject217
23 May 2003, 10:47 AM
9 for the second one. lose the titles.
on Library and Information Centre by Nicholas Jones
23 May 2003, 10:46 AM
Personal Computer? Political Correctness? Parrot Cooties? Pistachio Cookies? Parking Center? Perineum Cutting? (the last is the best)
for thse who don't know:
perineum: The portion of the body in the pelvis occupied by urogenital passages and the rectum, bounded in front by the pubic arch, in the back by the coccyx, and laterally by part of the hipbone.
The region between the scrotum and the anus in males, and between the posterior vulva junction and the anus in females
for thse who don't know:
perineum: The portion of the body in the pelvis occupied by urogenital passages and the rectum, bounded in front by the pubic arch, in the back by the coccyx, and laterally by part of the hipbone.
The region between the scrotum and the anus in males, and between the posterior vulva junction and the anus in females
on the ones that got away by runawaydrain
23 May 2003, 10:43 AM
how would you know hoe much money was owed if you forgot them? nice paradox.
on A Gift So True by Pooh_N_His_Honey
23 May 2003, 10:42 AM
you have a sense for words, try a different topic. Not all poetry is love and flowers. push yourself. this is also not haiku.
on Answered Prayers by Pooh_N_His_Honey
23 May 2003, 10:40 AM
maybe liquid concrete. I suggest boning up on the classifications of poetry. this, and the other, are freeform.