on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin
23 May 2003, 10:35 AM
do dead hamsters sit?
on Sharks For Libido by scitz
23 May 2003, 10:34 AM
5
12
3
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freeform?
12
3
?
freeform?
on American Idol epiphany in haiku by Shardik
23 May 2003, 10:32 AM
hey I get it.
on Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck by razorgrin
23 May 2003, 10:31 AM
how many syllables are there in "Yggdrasil"? how does that work? is it one per vowel phenome?
on Whales by Jeremi B. Handrinos
23 May 2003, 10:30 AM
line 1 and two rhyming is a distraction. haiku 2 and three are freakin' awesome, worth a doubloon apeice.
on The canary's last song by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 May 2003, 10:28 AM
very warner brothers. nicely done.
on Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
21 May 2003, 11:15 AM
nice.
on More from unlucky janitors by Bachus
21 May 2003, 11:12 AM
creepy. well done.
on All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) by razorgrin
21 May 2003, 11:10 AM
intriguing.
on The disfigured BlackSmith is loved by <{Baba^Yaga}>
21 May 2003, 11:07 AM
nice.
on The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus
21 May 2003, 11:05 AM
an i'm sure king midas is good at making trophies.
on Jokie Smurf by Bachus
21 May 2003, 11:04 AM
yee haw.
on Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 May 2003, 11:02 AM
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on this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni
21 May 2003, 11:01 AM
5
9
5
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it is more than shit. it is also more than a haiku.
9
5
?
it is more than shit. it is also more than a haiku.
on She'll never know by colndodg
21 May 2003, 11:00 AM
it is like licking a spoon after stirring baking soda.
on Cussedness by Nicholas Jones
21 May 2003, 10:57 AM
even funner would be to be a homosexual invalid in nazi germany.
The haiku is a japanese poetry form, evolved from the renga during the 16th century. It is a three line, unrhymed set of seventeed syllables (5-7-5).
It is typically a pair of contrasting concrete/sensory images, with each image so dependant on the other that the whole thing collapses if one word is altered.
this is neither good nor a haiku. maple syrup on sugar on a pile of trite pancakes.