Comments byhorus8, 1141–1160 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Skull fucking Miggy, a list, by Iggy Poppy by Bachus 11 Jul 2003, 11:54 AM
No I am blunt, like a hole cake.
on Wanksta by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 11 Jul 2003, 11:51 AM
Anything. but mediocre. It's ah... Bland.
replying on Omerta el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}> 10 Jul 2003, 4:50 PM
(the letter that slips, that is)
replying on Omerta el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}> 10 Jul 2003, 4:50 PM
Yes, it shatters, meaning, I guys we know it's not a letter.
on On A Night Like This by bazz 10 Jul 2003, 4:38 PM
Yes, Why! why! Because, your poetry is a sheasar salad with a tiny shnapkin and no fork. I hope these are the last words you ever write, because your shit fu is weak your sharate is weak and your face is a shit sale.
on Nothing you can say by Rodavlas 10 Jul 2003, 4:35 PM
A fish shitaco with shitillas (warm).
replying on Nigger Hole by horus8 10 Jul 2003, 2:00 PM
Yes...I know. I have set the keystones of evil.
on Abdullah's Theme by King Abdullah I 10 Jul 2003, 11:05 AM
Oh okay...Guess what then nigger. IT'S NOT A HAIKU! Aint that ace! Aint that just ace! ACE! ACE! Remember that band Ace of bass? I fucked them all with a nigger named Paul. Nigger.
True, but you do it for free.
on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr 10 Jul 2003, 10:18 AM
An instant classic.
replying on all american machine by nolan 10 Jul 2003, 10:05 AM
Don't for git "sacry" retart.
on all american machine by nolan 10 Jul 2003, 10:04 AM
Do you always chew your leg off when you're caught in a shoe box?
on smile by nolan 10 Jul 2003, 10:02 AM
Change the last line to "and kill motherfuckers" Otherwise the rest was just pointless jerking.
on Soul Solitude by leviathan 9 Jul 2003, 3:02 PM
Almost.
replying on The Drunkest ever by horus8 9 Jul 2003, 12:26 PM
Hackkneed poodle faced lap snorkel.
replying on The Drunkest ever by horus8 9 Jul 2003, 12:25 PM
Hack.
on The Beach by leviathan 9 Jul 2003, 12:22 PM
It's simple and picks up speed at the end, very good.
replying on My BPD vs Yours by OneFingerAnswer 9 Jul 2003, 2:53 AM
Huh, that's pretty cool. Good night.
on Herne by OneFingerAnswer 9 Jul 2003, 2:35 AM
You have come a long way my friend, and you have earned every moment. GOLDEN QUE TIP awarde, for having more heart than a rapscallion poet deserves. I like how you only put in the commas and allowed your capitalization to accentuate starts and stops, a fine piece, very handsome.
replying on Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8 9 Jul 2003, 2:27 AM
I know this broad is too much, every poet alive is bipolar, I'm bipolar with major drug addiction, coupled by male prostitution, no fucking money, shitty friends and family, a compulsive cleaning disorder, insomnia, alchoholism, and bisexuallity with acute sexual identity problems, not to mention paranoia, and an Oedipus complex the size of Madrid, and she's whining. I thought poets functioned better against these kinds of odds?