replying on Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8
9 Jul 2003, 2:21 AM
What happens then? Do you start writing poetry that isn't shit? In that case here's another nudge, cut your face next time to remind you and your type that life is worth more then a trip down the aisle, or to the pharmacy, or to an abortion clinic, or too a dear Aunts funeral. Poetry, is more then your speck of dust is shinier than mine, you hack.
on Cold Spiral by emeraldskies
9 Jul 2003, 2:13 AM
I wanted too let you know, that I didn't think your poetry was totally hopeless earlier, (it is frightfully young and sensitive) but I would be willing to teach you, some will warn you not to trust me (because they will be jealous),and because I am Grendal, I am offering you this opportunity because I went and read a bit about you on your home page and we have some of the same interests. I also would rather see you have a passion for writing and living rather than feeling resentful of who you are or how you percieve the world around you. I found that you were interesting and would be willing to have you as my apprentice.
replying on My BPD vs Yours by OneFingerAnswer
9 Jul 2003, 2:04 AM
Woah, you are a barrel of monkeys! lol!
on My BPD vs Yours by OneFingerAnswer
9 Jul 2003, 2:03 AM
That was too cool.
replying on From ugly ducklin' to swan by horus8
9 Jul 2003, 1:04 AM
Hwoarach! phhtewie! hack job poet aboard, mayday. "Hi! Margaret I'm your friend Joter" "don't worry I'll save you!" no, he won't, he's an unimaginative hack also, figures. You both should fucking take your weekend poet hats off and realize you're not poets, you're hacks. Margaret you are such a hack you thought shite was spelled wrong, I'm sorry, but every published poet in the world knows Olde English you twat, you are a fraud and a hack.
replying on From ugly ducklin' to swan by horus8
9 Jul 2003, 12:58 AM
(sound of horus grinding a loogie to spit!) A hack Margaret, you are a hack. You are a weekend poet and a hack.
replying on Blind Walk Into Poem Ranker by DreamerSupreme
9 Jul 2003, 12:40 AM
Probably, because you walked into a spectrum of 'true' poets waving your credentials around like we should give a fuck, having not even bothered to get familiar with any of the poet's work on this sight that have been here for years, and when we laughed, you got all pissed and started tagging good poetry with 0's in an immature fit brought on by sheer stupidity. That and the fact that your poetry is no where near the skill level to get away with that. It's mediocre at best. You walked into a mosh pit dressed for a polka, get it?
on Musehearts Swimming Lessons by DreamerSupreme
9 Jul 2003, 12:34 AM
What do you call Sincere Understanding hitting the water head first on the 4th of July?
"Thrown" a poem by Muse heart, a child killing hack.
"Thrown" a poem by Muse heart, a child killing hack.
replying on STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck
9 Jul 2003, 12:09 AM
Yes, and?
on SupremeDreamer by King Abdullah I
8 Jul 2003, 12:26 PM
"ermph" That's the souund gay men make in the closet of tranquility.
on My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I
7 Jul 2003, 7:29 PM
Too bad you didn't write it, cuz it's good.I was going to compliment you on improving.
on vacation by geewhiz1962
7 Jul 2003, 7:26 PM
This is actually funny, now that I think about it.
on the godself within by crwncka1
7 Jul 2003, 1:24 PM
"I found the sin of oceanic waters as I would drown" Christ, things are grim when even the Oceanic waters are sinning? you sure that's heaven and not just a blue and gold macaw eating a papaya?
on Things by MrsGretchen
7 Jul 2003, 1:04 PM
Another.
on My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I
7 Jul 2003, 12:51 PM
Yep.
on RHYMEZONE.COM by King Abdullah II
7 Jul 2003, 12:50 PM
Well, than lunch is in you.
on oh god please help me by crwncka1
7 Jul 2003, 12:46 PM
Yes, I often find myself doing the same thing in my closet with a toothbrush in me mums pink knickers.
"But my soul is still trapped inside myself" This line I believe really ups the stakes in life... I must admit. Having our own souls trapped inside our own bodys during our lives? It's preposterous and down right frightening. Especially, when we've become so accustumed to carrying them around under our hats.
"But my soul is still trapped inside myself" This line I believe really ups the stakes in life... I must admit. Having our own souls trapped inside our own bodys during our lives? It's preposterous and down right frightening. Especially, when we've become so accustumed to carrying them around under our hats.
on Crowning Achievement by MrsGretchen
7 Jul 2003, 12:38 PM
Better.
on Ocular Photoalbum by DreamerSupreme
6 Jul 2003, 5:58 PM
Daddy, oh sweet dear daddy.
on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus
6 Jul 2003, 5:54 PM
I love making myself laugh.