| Re: Call Me by newdawnfades |
20-Feb-03/5:27 PM |
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lactating while you weep is very becoming. i gave you the blue one.
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| Re: vent tent by Crakyamuni |
20-Feb-03/11:57 AM |
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I have never heard a buddhist come out of left field like you just did to express his feelings in such a un-monkishishish way. You are my hero. you wouldn't know budha from Malthusian. maybe that's your gimmeck? give em hell kid! here i packed you a lunch and even wrote your name on it, so i wouldn't forget who you are and you would never remember and nobody brought a fgucking snack anyway, Chip.
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| Re: Moo Gai Pai lover (dedicated to Settle) by Sylvia Bravo |
20-Feb-03/11:50 AM |
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What i thought was impressive was how you rhymed pengs,pong, I, and begs while maintaining absolutely no cohesiveness. You should get a life and give up on writing, before the stupid in you catches up with the psychotic desperation. THE SOONER YOU ADMIT TO THE FACT THAT you are an uneducated lesbian in need of thorazine, the sooner your dreams of being a papaya farmer with a mustache and cock will come true. Until then though, this is not a vilanelle, or sadly even remotely funny. Settle is gay and into rock hard hot biceps and shafts a pumping. not desperate idiots on the verge of garbage disposing their own faces out of sheer pathetic loneliness, and the fact that no one gives a shit.
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| Re: a comment on Weekend at the Taj by <~> |
19-Feb-03/12:17 PM |
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The great one... When did you get back, online? i thought you were counting sheep in a shack in tasmania?
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| Re: a comment on Weekend at the Taj by <~> |
19-Feb-03/12:15 PM |
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That's what i said;) <{.-:-.}> here's the ufo i promised you. xo h.
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| Re: Weekend at the Taj by <~> |
19-Feb-03/11:34 AM |
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It's missing your boss and a pawn shop.
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| Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined |
19-Feb-03/11:30 AM |
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Best thing you've written in 6 months, and people wonder why i tear the shit out of pseudo poetry? obviously because it's the opposite of this... GQT AWARDE! 10
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| Re: April Showers by mindsigns |
18-Feb-03/7:33 PM |
nice try, but you fail.
miserably may i add.
watch
Look at me a fucking hack
a steaming mound of poo
i can't see or turn back
because i'm sniffing glue
and i know i'm absurd
for dicking with the pope
it's just the way i praise the word
when i can barely cope
with the shit i read all day
how can one survive
i need a whip to properly flay
i hate being alive
Can you fucking blame me?
You were serving cold tea.
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| Re: On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels |
18-Feb-03/7:26 PM |
children mimic their parents, perhaps your a pig?
great haiku though.
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| Re: Synchronicity (Senryu) by bunniesnangels |
18-Feb-03/7:22 PM |
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| Re: Options (Senryu) by bunniesnangels |
18-Feb-03/7:21 PM |
Walk versus gay sex
a bowl of pears on table
factory worker
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| Re: Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones |
18-Feb-03/7:18 PM |
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Teah, but does your son nod off at three years old on the couch while playing video games sick on robitussin... sitting up playing salt water fishing? some thing just make me giggle.
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| Re: Dance With Me by marvelis |
18-Feb-03/7:05 PM |
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| Re: Past by Dostoyevsky |
18-Feb-03/6:52 PM |
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Check line 12, and do you mean fractal or fractual. lol. i'll wait.
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| Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
18-Feb-03/6:49 PM |
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it's Quailing named after that thingy that hangs in their face... lol. the last was the best.
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| Re: Karma by blankel |
18-Feb-03/6:41 PM |
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You have exceptional timing, but your poetry? creditcard's 3.00$? to view your web page and poetry? what are you some kind of fucking uppity elitist jew? you should fucking pay people three dollars to read this shit. three dollars a fucking second, idiot.
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| Re: Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig |
18-Feb-03/10:47 AM |
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Which part of this having 18 syllabols didn't you grasp. The 1 or the 8? Don't get me wrong, because i bend the rules everywhere, but it's unacceptable when dealing with haikus. it's the foundation of the structure and when dealing in this arena it's critical.
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| Re: Her Galactic Boudoir, his make-work by Bachus |
17-Feb-03/2:11 PM |
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I'm amazed you can even tie your shoes, let alone concentrate all of your magical powers to bury the east coast in a blanket of your racist demeanor. pickle chin.
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| Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
17-Feb-03/11:51 AM |
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| Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
17-Feb-03/11:14 AM |
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You can thank me for the ten in person, with chives.
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