on Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar
29 Jan 2003, 2:41 PM
Nice title. I felt like that too(although never on a horse).
on perversions 2: the revenge by razorgrin
29 Jan 2003, 2:24 PM
Eww... Sick but not as good as the others this get a 7. It might have been more if i had any clue as to what scat was.
on Perversions by razorgrin
29 Jan 2003, 2:20 PM
not as funny as 3. might it be possibble to get you to write a 4th? these are just too interesting.
on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin
29 Jan 2003, 2:09 PM
You said i was like charles manson? Like you have room to talk. your creepy. But oddly enough i find this poem so funny i gave it a ten. now i need to go gouge me eyes out for reading this.
replying on The Galenoi Saga by galiana
29 Jan 2003, 1:44 PM
Sure such as icarus who flew too close to the sun, hercules, achilles, the the oddesy, and the list is endless. If there was a book published about greek mytholoy i have probalby read it. I love greek mythology. Jason and the argonauts is one of my favorites razorgrin How bout you?
on The lyric of the cabbage by Dostoyevsky
29 Jan 2003, 1:32 PM
Ok a Poem about vegatables that mentions Dr. Lector? Just for mentioning the last name of Hannibal you Would get a ten by me but still, Cabbage? Hows an 8 sound.
on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos
27 Jan 2003, 5:37 PM
Not Bad for a chode but It seems a little repetive i gave it a six
replying on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
27 Jan 2003, 5:33 PM
Are you saying Humor isn't part of the human condition? I beg to
differ. With out a sense of humor we'd all run around with our head up our ASSES Like you.
P.S. I din't find your "pink bunny of prune" comment very funny shit wipe. I'm not out high school yet but i can still tell a chode like you to go get your boyfriends dick surgically remove from your ass.
differ. With out a sense of humor we'd all run around with our head up our ASSES Like you.
P.S. I din't find your "pink bunny of prune" comment very funny shit wipe. I'm not out high school yet but i can still tell a chode like you to go get your boyfriends dick surgically remove from your ass.
on Forgotten by famenglory
27 Jan 2003, 5:06 PM
Keep Up the good work famenglory.
on amanda by famenglory
27 Jan 2003, 4:09 PM
Ouch you scare me. Its short but hey i like it
on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
27 Jan 2003, 2:53 PM
Lovely, Just Lovely
on missing time by Bill Z Bub
27 Jan 2003, 2:29 PM
I loved it. Don't change it no matter what anyone says.
on winter by w~* ATHENA *~w
27 Jan 2003, 2:22 PM
Confusing and short.
on Spring Rolls by Ranger
27 Jan 2003, 2:19 PM
Sorry dude to tell the truth this peom is kinda lame. No offence to you or anything. Just A question Is there some hidden meaning here that we're not getting? Just asking.
on affection wasted by milkymilk
27 Jan 2003, 2:11 PM
I'm not one to cry but my eyes got a little misty reading that. I've been in that boat too.
on The Galenoi Saga by galiana
27 Jan 2003, 2:04 PM
Very original retelling of Jason and the Argonauts. That happens to be one of my favorite stories in greek mythology so I Voted it a ten.
on distance by Crakyamuni
27 Jan 2003, 2:00 PM
Confusing as those "sound of one hand clapping" type questions but i like the 2nd and 3rd lines.
on Lachrymalia by Lain
27 Jan 2003, 12:16 PM
You have a good flow and i like the way you used the phoenix
on Wasted by LucidRevelation
27 Jan 2003, 12:10 PM
I like it
on All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl
27 Jan 2003, 12:07 PM
Very Good Description Of Feelings.