replying on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom
31 Mar 2005, 2:23 PM
No, but I'm sure if you ask her real nice, she'll tell you to goto hell.
replying on Maybe Someday by Luzr
31 Mar 2005, 2:19 PM
Where, over there, lets go get his autograph
No I introduce myself as a walking cliche(Because, lets face it, I am)
No I introduce myself as a walking cliche(Because, lets face it, I am)
replying on James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom
31 Mar 2005, 2:16 PM
Name for me one person named Stephen(The other Steven) whom can claim that they've ever kissed more than 3 girls who weren't related to them.
replying on Against the Gorgon by thepinkbunnyofdoom
31 Mar 2005, 2:12 PM
A3: Suicide is the ending of ones own life. Here it was done accidentally.
A4: Am I a preteen, or is that all you'll let yourself see me as? Its not about suicide, that was merely what you chose to focus on.
A4: Am I a preteen, or is that all you'll let yourself see me as? Its not about suicide, that was merely what you chose to focus on.
replying on Maybe Someday by Luzr
30 Mar 2005, 10:13 AM
Impressive and inspiring. As always.
<3 Jason
<3 Jason
replying on Against the Gorgon by thepinkbunnyofdoom
29 Mar 2005, 11:53 PM
A1: Because looks much as I call them such, are not weapons, by which anyone has ever bled.
A2: Not really. Most people I tend to at least need a plan to kill themselves, a will, and that one last bitter spitful note speaking of the tragic irony that is life, blah blah, I hate you mother, see you in heaven(idiots).
<3 Jason
A2: Not really. Most people I tend to at least need a plan to kill themselves, a will, and that one last bitter spitful note speaking of the tragic irony that is life, blah blah, I hate you mother, see you in heaven(idiots).
<3 Jason
replying on Against the Gorgon by thepinkbunnyofdoom
29 Mar 2005, 10:05 PM
More of a failed murder, that results in the death of the would be murder by mistake. Focus more on the images of an evil eye, and a mirror.
replying on A Little Further by thepinkbunnyofdoom
29 Mar 2005, 12:27 AM
And a good one. I'll keep that in mind when I tackle a rewrite.
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<3 Jason
on "Lovers or Friends" by jroday
28 Mar 2005, 9:25 AM
Few typos here and there, and a nice piece but it lacks some of the finer points of craftmanship.
Things this Needs
A) A good title, that doesn't give away your ending, much less the entire poem.
B) A better thought out meter.
C) Spellcheck.
D) A rewrite.
Til then -5-
Things this Needs
A) A good title, that doesn't give away your ending, much less the entire poem.
B) A better thought out meter.
C) Spellcheck.
D) A rewrite.
Til then -5-
"A second first" as in a new first glance. I fell in love with this girl at sight. "You tend to be hard, but you are tender with this girl", simply put, I love her. What she was to me at one time, will never be forgotten. She's the reason for my greatest high of living, and my greatest low. I'd die for a second chance to be with her.
<3 Jason
<3 Jason
replying on The Sidekick Retires From Fairview's Finest by luzrheroguy
28 Mar 2005, 7:04 AM
Yeah, its me.
Have no fear. My gift won't go wasted. I have youth on my side.
<3 Jason
Have no fear. My gift won't go wasted. I have youth on my side.
<3 Jason
replying on The White Room by thepinkbunnyofdoom
26 Mar 2005, 2:00 AM
A1: Most of mine really have been about actual experiences, and yes, of mine.
A2: Wouldn't dream of it. Couldn't imagine myself as to being so crazy as ro do something as off the wall as doing something actual.
<3 Jason
A2: Wouldn't dream of it. Couldn't imagine myself as to being so crazy as ro do something as off the wall as doing something actual.
<3 Jason
on American Poet by horus8
25 Mar 2005, 12:42 PM
Rolls on floor laughing, opps.... Pissed pants, but still laughing out loud. Good stuff. -10-
on The Symbol by Dovina
24 Mar 2005, 5:41 PM
I love the "probably AIDS" bit. I can't help but wonder if that wasn't just a bit of on the ranker humor though, or is it something else?
<3 Jason
<3 Jason
replying on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
22 Mar 2005, 1:34 AM
What a child. Grow the fuck up. Go to the local libary, and read a few big kid books. If the weastest insult possible, a hahaha, and your smoltering zero are the best you've got, give me a second, to hide in fear. Not.
<3 Jason
<3 Jason
replying on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
22 Mar 2005, 1:30 AM
Having never read the book, I'll have to agree, but add that the pterodactal, be lit from the beak, by a lighter, using his toes.
replying on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
21 Mar 2005, 1:04 AM
Who says we have to be serious all the time. I'm not so sure that life is at all a serious matter. I mean come on. What fun would that be?
<3 Jason
<3 Jason
replying on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222
20 Mar 2005, 8:19 PM
Only because the true kings feel like letting me be.
<3 Jason
<3 Jason
replying on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
20 Mar 2005, 10:15 AM
Always, why shouldn't I be? I wrote the word "pus" and got six 10's for it. Because I'm good? No. Because someone thinks, that I'm a genius(silly girls and thinking). But its true none the less. How many crap poems of mine are in the top ten right now? Too many.
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<3 Jason