on The End! by ARTIE
15 Jul 2002, 5:07 PM
Oh my Dog! There is cleverness in your tone! Very well....
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8
15 Jul 2002, 4:59 PM
Geeeeeez! What are you in for?
on HERE TO THERE by ARTIE
22 Jul 2002, 2:02 PM
That "mushroom trip", as psylycybic(?) as it was, may as well have been 12 years of marriage...as the story was told. Love is often unfortunate!
on Death and the Non-Scanning Poem by tooniron
18 Jul 2002, 7:21 AM
I like it, but, after the first three lines I was struggling with the flow. The only good cat, is a dead cat!
on some deleted poem
18 Jul 2002, 7:44 AM
It starts out hip-hop, then turns into the antithesis of it's own title. The systhesis of it all, though, is in the last two lines, "Next thursday......." I like it in a mixed up sort of way.
on Why we're here by ARTIE
18 Jul 2002, 9:46 AM
Ah..., but for the chance, a muffin to bake, I realize now, my haiku mistake!
Can I borrow a spatula?
Can I borrow a spatula?
on Clit by unknown
17 Jul 2002, 5:51 PM
Oh, Dark Angel, if your "maximum grid in Paintshop Pro" is blocking your view, how can you even comment on the last line? Go for it Razorgrin, dive in and seek.
on some deleted poem
17 Jul 2002, 6:11 PM
Wow! Nothing like an efficient, conscientious, life support system!
on Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
17 Jul 2002, 6:21 PM
Hmmmmm! This smells of....not the F.B.I., but of why?
on some deleted poem
17 Jul 2002, 6:29 PM
...unless you've walked in those shoes, it could be your personal hell. Tread lightly!
on Your Smile by ARTIE
15 Jul 2002, 4:23 PM
Oh, Dark Angel, what have you done?
You couldn't see the need for a smaller glass? You can dish it, but you cannot take it. In my irreverant dyslexia, "Oh my Dog! What have I done?" Ask horus8 for a Zanex, it'll all be well.
You couldn't see the need for a smaller glass? You can dish it, but you cannot take it. In my irreverant dyslexia, "Oh my Dog! What have I done?" Ask horus8 for a Zanex, it'll all be well.
on Your Smile by ARTIE
15 Jul 2002, 2:10 PM
Sorry, but the real answer is: You, need a smaller glass!
on Your Smile by ARTIE
15 Jul 2002, 1:40 PM
Hey Dark Angel, answer me this: Do you see a glass as half empty or half full?
I'm curious.
I'm curious.
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2002, 12:08 PM
I like all the thought here. It is simple and identifiable.
on Black Hole Soul by Red_is_life
15 Jul 2002, 12:17 PM
Morbidly entertaining. Good vision.