on Stranger by mytenderrage
22 Jul 2002, 3:17 PM
Let us go for a walk, past the cemetary of time. You'll awaken.
on Existence; Part 1 by ARTIE
22 Jul 2002, 4:49 PM
Speak!
on some deleted poem
25 Jul 2002, 10:56 AM
Oh yeah, REAL meaningful comment! About as meaningful as my realtionship with an inflatable doll; I had to give her up - she was just too needy!
on some deleted poem
24 Jul 2002, 9:50 PM
The last line leaves me .....Looking for Jesu at Club "Med". Bum"Med", that is! The rest of it reads conceitedly well.
on Eclipse 99 by hlatkins
24 Jul 2002, 9:53 PM
I could see where I was going, until I decided instead...to go to bed. But, I like it.
on summer by itchiwitch
24 Jul 2002, 9:56 PM
Good Haiku! Great imagery. Geeeeez! Can someone just submit a reasonable criticism once in a while in this venue? "10"
on Santa Ana, California by bondjedi
24 Jul 2002, 9:58 PM
Good Haiku! Great imagery! "10"
Geeeez! Can one ever receive valid critique in this venue?
Geeeez! Can one ever receive valid critique in this venue?
on some deleted poem
22 Jul 2002, 2:08 PM
I'm initially lost between the starting spider and the whale, but, it gets better...to good. It is consummate in the end.
on some deleted poem
22 Jul 2002, 2:08 PM
I'm initially lost between the starting spider and the whale, but, it gets better...to good. It is consummate in the end.
on some deleted poem
22 Jul 2002, 2:54 PM
I like the way it flows to the last line. Good job of futuristic thought. "To Exist!"
on The Sea by venusdemilo
22 Jul 2002, 2:56 PM
Existentalism in its simplicity. Taoism struggles within this!
on The Eyestroke by seebergerb
22 Jul 2002, 2:58 PM
2nd stanza says it all for humanity! It reminds me of another poem. See my letter to time.
on some deleted poem
22 Jul 2002, 3:04 PM
Reads like an orgiastic trip through time. Good word flow.
on Suffocating by mytenderrage
22 Jul 2002, 3:10 PM
There is help available. Vallium, Darvocet, any narcotic will suffice. Take two, breathe deeply, and call me in the morning. The doctor is "In".
on Craving by mytenderrage
22 Jul 2002, 3:14 PM
We all crave love, or the chance to bake muffins. Anyone who needs to see a shrink, needs to have their head examined! I like it.
on Wondering Eyes by Holden
22 Jul 2002, 3:24 PM
Whether to "Wander" or "Wonder", Will Angels set you free?
Coexistence herein, is truly the key.
Coexistence herein, is truly the key.
on The Mirror Man by Mister Cakes
22 Jul 2002, 4:47 PM
A paradox, or utter paranoia? Stop looking there!
on The Poison by TheTiredTyrant
22 Jul 2002, 5:07 PM
Oh straightened back,
on slab of stone,
so tense, no slack,
you're not alone!
on slab of stone,
so tense, no slack,
you're not alone!
on Small and Simple by venusdemilo
22 Jul 2002, 3:28 PM
The breakup of a Relationship; A study of Sociologic pathology.
(Sociology 101)
We all "stumbles" through this.
(Sociology 101)
We all "stumbles" through this.
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
10 Oct 2003, 7:34 PM
One has only to read [most of] the string of comments above to realize that DA's third verse is the genius that confused, then offended and then inspired all of you to quickly "pull your open blouses closed" thereby revealing your own prudish personal brawl, the subliminal "clothing" that protects the spew of your ment. DA mocked - and won. That ot to be wth a tn.