poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (1061-1080)

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on some deleted poem 21 Oct 2002, 11:50 AM
sweet.
on Fruit Punch by teacup 21 Oct 2002, 11:17 AM
don't vote for your own poems. thank you.
on health cards by slipping 21 Oct 2002, 11:43 AM
what is a health card?
on some deleted poem 22 Oct 2002, 6:50 AM
even better now, mrs.g
on THE MISSING HEART by Prince of Void 21 Oct 2002, 8:29 AM
WE MIGHT PERCEIVE YOUR WORDS AS MORE ROMANTIC IF YOU DIDN'T SHOUT ALL THE TIME.
on The Dreamer by Nicholas Jones 23 Oct 2002, 7:38 AM
the more you write them, the more easily they flow. strength in discipline. nice work.
on regret. by darby pyn 21 Oct 2002, 11:29 AM
you are to be watched. edit more. genius happens in the darkroom.
on Body Language by Ninoy_Instigator 22 Oct 2002, 6:55 AM
suspiciously strikes me as too soft-sounding a word, but i love the implications. very good.
on InCumBent by slipping 21 Oct 2002, 11:45 AM
"when intimacy rots on your body because you never used your heart "
nicely put. shape it some more. it could be great.
on Mi Virgin De Guadalupe by slipping 21 Oct 2002, 11:48 AM
did you mean 'altar' at the last? because i like it better as 'alter'. nice job.
on some deleted poem 21 Oct 2002, 11:53 AM
what is encontrarte?
on unprepared by Aggreddion 21 Oct 2002, 11:54 AM
u shoodent use u. it's bad spellin
on Dream Maker by Blue Magpie 21 Oct 2002, 11:55 AM
prententious.
on some deleted poem 21 Oct 2002, 11:14 AM
why




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stanzas?
on Premarital Sex (Zombie Fantasy) by Sigh'ense... 21 Oct 2002, 11:17 AM
you judge. why? leave that to the cotton mathers of the world. if you are going to abandon yourself to it, do so. you're not shockong anyone, except maybe shin.
on this tuesday morning by teacup 21 Oct 2002, 11:18 AM
hey wow. this rhymes. IT MUST BE A POEME!!!!
on A love of the midlands by ==Doylum 21 Oct 2002, 1:02 PM
bloody hell
on some deleted poem 21 Oct 2002, 8:41 AM
shouldn't it be 'they abash'?
i don't buy the warm bit. nor the verve. the sea is ancient and mighty., not young and spritely.
on some deleted poem 21 Oct 2002, 11:25 AM
even then. it is not sexy. it is sexier. truth
on nothing could by nentwined 21 Oct 2002, 8:25 AM
and then you stopped.
excellent.