on strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub
23 Dec 2002, 8:02 AM
like it
on Laughing all the way to the playground by w~* ATHENA *~w
23 Dec 2002, 7:22 AM
what exactly do you mean to do by posting others' work as your own?
anyone who wanted to read this can go here: http://www.bibble.org/misc/thefish.html
to read <i>Misc: The Fish</i>
By Marianne Moore
anyone who wanted to read this can go here: http://www.bibble.org/misc/thefish.html
to read <i>Misc: The Fish</i>
By Marianne Moore
replying on Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood by scitz
23 Dec 2002, 6:19 AM
i think you need to imply that. she awoke the soul in you; she breathed fire into your being. the repeat has a lovely cadence to it, but you have left out the crux of it. be empty before and empty after--in words.
see, i thought that was what you meant, but i could have thought anything. i wanted more clues.
also, this line is confusing to me:
And every good trait of me,
did not wait for me, to represent it.
see, i thought that was what you meant, but i could have thought anything. i wanted more clues.
also, this line is confusing to me:
And every good trait of me,
did not wait for me, to represent it.
on Legend by ThoughtfulSoul
21 Dec 2002, 10:05 PM
nope. sorry. you were correct: your
heart has been turned to the color of nightfall.
heart has been turned to the color of nightfall.
on Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood by scitz
21 Dec 2002, 9:57 PM
um, weren't you already "skin, bone, flesh and blood"? or did i miss something?
on One by adrenalize
21 Dec 2002, 9:53 PM
yeah. good idea. make love not war. why can't we all just get along? buck up, little camper, every cloud has a silver lining. here, have one point for each unoriginal stanza.
on RMAED by deep-as-a-puddle
21 Dec 2002, 9:44 PM
although this sounds like a pleasant diversion, i'll pass.
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
20 Dec 2002, 7:21 AM
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replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 3:43 PM
do you watch porn, p&k? o\i mean, other than the tapes we made in delaware that time?
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 2:07 PM
pshaw!
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 2:05 PM
please, don't ever pigeonhole a person. i write from my observations. i think of stereotypes as hypotheses that need to be disproved. why would you ever assume a poet would accept a stereo type as fact? isn't writing poetry about breaking through the mundane? argh!
i gotta go to the farm and take a hot tub. and then maybe some naked volleyball.
i gotta go to the farm and take a hot tub. and then maybe some naked volleyball.
replying on UltraSound by UnityMitford
19 Dec 2002, 1:56 PM
he sent his dad the ultrasounds, and this was his reply.
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 1:49 PM
p.s. don't believe him when he tells you he plays naked volleyball. he never takes of that old-fashioned striped tanktop swimsuit of his, not even to shower!
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 1:47 PM
how long have you been on this site, lunar?
go on, piss somebody off. watch overnight as you get loaded down with zeros. i saw it happen to p&k and it happened to me as well. i used to have 5 in the top 15, then my fanclub ousted me overnight.
as for whether or not p&k is an ass, well, he is arrogant but honest. and a lot of people can't handle the truth, especially when it is delivered point blank with a sledge hammer and a vodka chaser. he's really an old softie, although he wouldn't want that let out. he looks like basil rathbone as sherlock holmes, in his tweeds, smoking his pipe, grading papers.... such a character! and horus wants to pummel him! oy!
go on, piss somebody off. watch overnight as you get loaded down with zeros. i saw it happen to p&k and it happened to me as well. i used to have 5 in the top 15, then my fanclub ousted me overnight.
as for whether or not p&k is an ass, well, he is arrogant but honest. and a lot of people can't handle the truth, especially when it is delivered point blank with a sledge hammer and a vodka chaser. he's really an old softie, although he wouldn't want that let out. he looks like basil rathbone as sherlock holmes, in his tweeds, smoking his pipe, grading papers.... such a character! and horus wants to pummel him! oy!
replying on UltraSound by UnityMitford
19 Dec 2002, 1:01 PM
your email's broken. again.
replying on UltraSound by UnityMitford
19 Dec 2002, 11:27 AM
that sucks,h. i did not understand your comment. so sorry for the loss. i know you were so happy about the baby.
a lot.