poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (1101-1120) and replies

Comments by<~>, 1101–1120 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on two poles are better than one by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 6:19 AM
i'm sorry, but i think you miss the point. i was looking within, and that is where this 'messed up pile of words' came from. i don't believe i was judging anybody's feelings; i am not interested in trends. as far as my comments not making sense--did you think about them at all? i mean to provoke thought when i comment on a poem. if you can find no sense in them, do not lay it on me. as for the one you gave me because you are 'nice', i fail to see the logic behind that gesture.

welcome to the site. enjoy your stay.
on He Is.... by LovingWhispers 26 Nov 2002, 8:32 PM
no.
on Shipwrecked... by LovingWhispers 26 Nov 2002, 8:31 PM
appealing in its barreness. but un new. so? an 8 because i am a sucker for a love poem, even if it feels like self help. you watch oprah, dontcha?
on Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88 26 Nov 2002, 8:30 PM
ah, melinda. invest in black. you'll wear it well.
on Jumble by un4208 26 Nov 2002, 8:29 PM
and then?
on memory by Goose 26 Nov 2002, 8:28 PM
bites. hard. and that's good. have an 8
on Wallet Burn by New Life Drug 26 Nov 2002, 8:27 PM
erasing them won't do any good if i have the numbers.then you'll feel the burn.

did i ever tell you guys about the nice irish boy who got naked and forgot his wallet in my back seat? so i sent his wife porn on his amex, with love from me? no? too bad. it was a funny story. buy me a beer sometime, and i'll even tell you about the crackwhore i saved him from.
on ode to horus by daniella 26 Nov 2002, 8:24 PM
not my slice, i hope. you did save one for me, didn't you dearie? with pepperoni?
on ode to bacchus by daniella 26 Nov 2002, 8:24 PM
so, where have i heard that before? 'soulles goat', that is. i must have been bending too close to his brown eye. again. dammit. i love an asshole that can rhyme.
on With Sleepless Breath... by LovingWhispers 26 Nov 2002, 8:21 PM
a very comforting chant, but, this line feels awkward in sound: "When I think about us making love "
replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 8:15 PM
welcome back,
replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 8:06 PM
works okay. but why the judge in the first stanza? how'd your shoulder get busted?
replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 8:05 PM
swing the meaning a bit. my favorite haikus have a twist implied within. e.g.--the first 2 lines make me think of a disco ball, but your title isn't duplictous enough to make the last line a relevation. see it?
replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 8:03 PM
ben left to go do something manly, i think. so it was just me and nat and the kids and crazy paul. ho hum. that's why i'm home early. oh, and the slammer showed up and had a bite with us too.
replying on Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8 26 Nov 2002, 8:01 PM
have you not been reading my poems? sanity is furtive, p&k.
besides, you're not west coast, even if you did camp out there. poser. great divide, my eye. you have no coast of your own! ha! why would anyone do that to themself?
on Boxers Over Y-Fronts by un4208 26 Nov 2002, 7:49 PM
so you wear your boxers over your y-fronts, that way, when a chick laughs at you for being small, you can blame it on your undergarments? GENIUS!!!
on Surface Damage by un4208 26 Nov 2002, 7:45 PM
very, very special. and your bus, among other things, is half the normal size, non?
replying on Friend by MysticalRaven88 26 Nov 2002, 7:40 PM
jesus. you guys get hard when the wind blows, don't you
on Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8 26 Nov 2002, 7:35 PM
oh my. left coast strikes back. and makes me smile.
replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:29 PM
no. just dinner tonight. i'll save getting naked for when there are at least 20 of us there, thank you very much.