on The Baby Sponge by ruella
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
This would have been great, if it was not scientifically inaccurate.
on A Moment in Time by nentwined
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Spectacular.
on the absent-minded walk on the proverbial mountainside of nothingness + my mother's old tampons by skaskowski
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
meter and rhyme can redeem many subjects.
on Ifni's birthday by Cha no Onna
14 Apr 2002, 3:50 PM
Ok, so maybe I _am_ damn cute sometimes. =P Only you would have immortalized it in a haiku. =)
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
I actually use a method like this for story ideas. But how literally did you mean this poem?
on Avian Child by Tekara
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Wings up! Open skies!
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
*laughter*
on Sleep does my eyes by nentwined
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Why does so much of your poetry sound like music to me?
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Thank you.
on The Secret by nentwined
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
*nods*
on Social Parody by skaskowski
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
I must be slow again today. I don't get it. Or is it supposed to be pointless? I am clueless.
on To walk in a dream in a dream by mozac
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
This dances.
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Unresolved image: what is lying in that room supposed to evoke?
on Sugar Coating by nentwined
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
An around-the-corner image. Almost as twisted as the pill itself, I'm sure.
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Good image - you probably don't need "nice" in the first stanza.
on These things that we bury by Jody Conn
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
it stumbles in the execution, but is better writ than I could have done.
on Breeze In Spring by Jody Conn
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Seductive in it's rhythm.
on Waiting to understand by Cha no Onna
17 Apr 2002, 7:17 PM
just, so. yeah.