on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus
17 Sep 2002, 8:52 AM
One can admire the work without admiring the sentiment. A worthy lesson, at least.
on Spellbound by Limness
17 Sep 2002, 8:49 AM
Not only a beautiful sentiment, but flawlessly executed as well.
on A Man Of The World by vulcan
17 Sep 2002, 8:48 AM
I wonder how many stories about green fairies this poem has engendered.
on Raining in Dream by memorybabe
17 Sep 2002, 8:46 AM
There's a lot of detrius in the beginning of this; meaningless phrases. Perhaps your intended effect; but it shrouds the meaning you're heading for in the second half.
on To You by Cha no Onna
11 Sep 2002, 11:48 PM
I rather liked stanza 4. But then I guess I'm into odd line breaks.
on My Life as a Book by molly
10 Aug 2002, 9:28 PM
clear imagery, good encapsulation of the moment. =)
on Earthquake by ifni
24 Jun 2002, 6:11 PM
The poem is about stopping to think; a difficult word is intended to enhance that effect. =)
on Assassin's Song by Tekara
19 May 2002, 10:29 PM
Hmm.. I wonder if I know this person, too?
on pull by skaskowski
16 May 2002, 5:53 PM
very evocative.
on Cour by Cha no Onna
9 May 2002, 7:16 PM
It's not because you no longer care, but because you no longer _fear_ . =)
on (untitled) by Mystifying
21 Apr 2002, 2:05 PM
Arg! Line wrap!!
on Human self pity by Service
21 Apr 2002, 2:00 PM
moments of clarity through a general incomprehensibility.
on For fun by Cha no Onna
17 Apr 2002, 7:18 PM
*snicker* two-fiddy, two-fiddy.
on Waiting to understand by Cha no Onna
17 Apr 2002, 7:17 PM
just, so. yeah.
on Ifni's birthday by Cha no Onna
14 Apr 2002, 3:50 PM
Ok, so maybe I _am_ damn cute sometimes. =P Only you would have immortalized it in a haiku. =)
on Sleep does my eyes by nentwined
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Why does so much of your poetry sound like music to me?
on The Secret by nentwined
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
*nods*