on The Pain by silver
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
I've said it before.... more!
on Avian Child by Tekara
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Wings up! Open skies!
on These things that we bury by Jody Conn
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
it stumbles in the execution, but is better writ than I could have done.
on Breeze In Spring by Jody Conn
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Seductive in it's rhythm.
on Sugar Coating by nentwined
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
An around-the-corner image. Almost as twisted as the pill itself, I'm sure.
on the absent-minded walk on the proverbial mountainside of nothingness + my mother's old tampons by skaskowski
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
meter and rhyme can redeem many subjects.
on A Moment in Time by nentwined
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Spectacular.
on The Baby Sponge by ruella
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
This would have been great, if it was not scientifically inaccurate.
on To walk in a dream in a dream by mozac
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
This dances.
on Beloved Infidel by ObiWonKn
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
I must be slow... I don't get the point.
on A Vision of Dark Desire by crims0ngh0st
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
I would expect this subject to have sharper conflicts in it's imagery.
on Vituperation by crims0ngh0st
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Imagery much better, has that vicious edge to it.
on Question of the day by PooP
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Interesting, poetry as commentary... hm..
on Homecoming by ObiWonKn
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Beautiful imagery.
on Social Parody by skaskowski
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
I must be slow again today. I don't get it. Or is it supposed to be pointless? I am clueless.
on One Word by T. Becquerel
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
This is a form I use sometimes, and is well executed but the last/solution line is a little awkward.