on Enigma by BadPoet
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
*laughter*
on One Word by T. Becquerel
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
This is a form I use sometimes, and is well executed but the last/solution line is a little awkward.
on Beloved Infidel by ObiWonKn
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
I must be slow... I don't get the point.
on A Vision of Dark Desire by crims0ngh0st
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
I would expect this subject to have sharper conflicts in it's imagery.
on Vituperation by crims0ngh0st
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Imagery much better, has that vicious edge to it.
on Question of the day by PooP
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Interesting, poetry as commentary... hm..
on Homecoming by ObiWonKn
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
Beautiful imagery.