on fairy tale by jlanza
13 Sep 2002, 2:13 PM
poetry by numbers .... should in be with in last line ? or are you in someone elses story
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2002, 3:47 PM
;-) .. tried to send you an e-mail but it got returned .. do you have another address ?
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2002, 6:02 PM
..... mind you ; having just re-read The Sea .... well , i don't think you can criticise me for structure .. unless i'm missing something .. maybe you could explain
on winter every day (Don't bother reading this) by unknown
13 Sep 2002, 3:14 PM
ditto ... kinda funny .. 4
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2002, 2:55 PM
stunning first 2 stanzas ... then got lost ...... 5
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2002, 2:48 PM
don't sound so kind to me .... pity you're so crushed , but there are worse things .... 3
on Life : Paradox by amateurR
13 Sep 2002, 2:59 PM
muddled , but then that's life ... is that the word which explains itself ? ... 4
on Hard Times by beakism
13 Sep 2002, 3:08 PM
.. like the footprints ( new to me ) ... makes it a concrete poem ? ... w==h==e==e==l==s perhaps ... 4
on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom
13 Sep 2002, 2:07 PM
this haiku sure has a lot of syllables .....
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2002, 2:17 PM
childish ... but can't really blame you for that can we
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2002, 2:19 PM
.... oh , bugger ......thought you were growing up there for a minute ... 3
on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
13 Sep 2002, 2:36 PM
aah , a real poem ... such a relief ... at the end is the questioning form and use of 'elusive ' tautological .... i like the bird ... self contained vs the twosome .... breathing exercises captures it too .... 8
on Torn... by loneshadow29
13 Sep 2002, 2:40 PM
the universe does not care about you .... work for your own 'salvation' .... 3
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2002, 5:52 PM
well thanx tarquin for pointing that out to our prize-winning friend ; my thoughts exactly . it's just a load of twaddle with circles and spirals . as pointed out elsewhere "coda" is the coda of a body of work starting with "nice poem" presented for general wonderment about what everybody would think about it .. it certainly means a lot to me ... whereas this one means zip ... be interesting to see what he has to say about my sonnets :-)
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2002, 12:01 PM
well,p&k it you seem to be becoming the resident arse-hole ( speaking in the mother tongue ) of this site ... you will have to excuse me but from where i'm coming from your winning comps in poetry at college ( creative writing classes !! real ones at that.... fer krissakes ) is merely one up from the young lady citing her school teacher
... so you've read keats and can come three times in a row ... well done boy , when you become a man write poetry to show it and i'm sure we will all revise our opinions
... so you've read keats and can come three times in a row ... well done boy , when you become a man write poetry to show it and i'm sure we will all revise our opinions
on some deleted poem
12 Aug 2002, 2:18 PM
LOL (really) 1 point for that and one more for rhythm
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2002, 6:34 PM
..wow ,..... er ... thanx .i shall hesitate to delete this ; ... but not for long .
on constructed word poem #6 by david
12 Aug 2002, 2:26 PM
ubiquitous in tendency,. mmmmm nice