on pissed off pretentious prat by keatsImnot
13 Sep 2002, 3:35 PM
know whatcha mean .... us poets eh ? how special we are ! ... 4
on A Man Of The World by vulcan
14 Sep 2002, 12:58 AM
:-) ..... 5
on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus
14 Sep 2002, 12:45 AM
;-D for the ps . no vote
on Babys Got Blue Eyes by w~* ATHENA *~w
14 Sep 2002, 12:12 AM
:-) ...... 4
on some deleted poem
14 Sep 2002, 12:39 AM
no comment and impossible to vote .... i'll just shut up .
on some deleted poem
14 Sep 2002, 12:42 AM
blinded by too much sun .... 2
on My Mamma's Hands by amateurR
13 Sep 2002, 11:41 PM
pragmatic fingernails an interesting phrase but should only be used once ,or if intentionally reversed closer together ... paints a picture of death .... is that right ? .. 4
on A Man Of The World by vulcan
13 Sep 2002, 11:49 PM
sounds like you woke from a nice dream to a nasty reality .... would have worked better for me if fairy fiddle and gate were on separate lines as then killing the gate would have had more impact ..... 4
on Spellbound by Limness
14 Sep 2002, 12:01 AM
Gold will tell others the words we have said ..... no comprendo .... the rest has definitely got something , shows feeling and thought ..... your feline escort is plural , is that condensed into your one lover ? ... 6
on Raining in Dream by memorybabe
14 Sep 2002, 12:18 AM
sounds like its chock-full of meaning ..... couple of typos ( ? ) stop me searching for it ..... 4
on Im different so what? by xblackstarsx
14 Sep 2002, 12:20 AM
wouldn't worry about them ..... fuck 'em ! ...... 4
on Lonely by xblackstarsx
14 Sep 2002, 12:23 AM
that'as what friends are for ..... a good cry is great but self pity in a poem doesn't do it .. 3
on Persephone by Lynn
14 Sep 2002, 12:35 AM
bloody 'ell ! .... that woke me up ... 7
on Full Fathom Five by vulcan
14 Sep 2002, 1:16 AM
what crap , one thinks at the start .... then balloons beating bashfully reinforce blueness to grab attention .. and then superior literary knowledge demands more respect ... an interesting acceptance curve ... is nuisant from nuisance or of the night ? .... could i suggest use of (i think ) subjunctive ... were it not for S's sake .... 6
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2002, 3:21 PM
restless , or calm ? flows nice ... likewise images .. 5
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2002, 3:24 PM
it may sound petty , but typos definitely detract .... 3
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2002, 3:28 PM
lol .... dunno why .... 4
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2002, 3:30 PM
quite qute quomment on us way of life ... 4