on My Courtney by secretlyvulnerable
18 Oct 2007, 7:44 AM
.... er ... perp or victim ? ( or do you consider yourself both ?) ... nul points ... for the poem alone, that is
on Unmistakably Mistaken by secretlyvulnerable
18 Oct 2007, 7:45 AM
juvenile ... still, can't knock you for your years
on Alice to Slumber by Skamper
18 Oct 2007, 7:48 AM
scary as fuck and somewhat sexy ... or am i reading too much there? .... more tea .... genius
on This Song by MacFrantic
18 Oct 2007, 7:51 AM
cop-out saying it's for someone else .... good story tho
on inside the raven by PsydewaysTears
18 Oct 2007, 7:53 AM
don't he though
on Holding You by forsaken
18 Oct 2007, 7:54 AM
shows promise
on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0
18 Oct 2007, 7:56 AM
too many words
on The Devil and I by forsaken
18 Oct 2007, 7:59 AM
re-write once the devil has gone and note the difference
on Owl Eyes by MacFrantic
18 Oct 2007, 8:00 AM
dunno why but i like this ... poetry,though... not so sure
on A double haiku about President Putin by Engelbert Humpalot
18 Oct 2007, 8:01 AM
cute
on some deleted poem
18 Oct 2007, 8:03 AM
quite agree ... i'll give myself one too ... for the structure
on some deleted poem
19 Oct 2007, 1:47 PM
you da senryu boss
tongue stays within my own mouth
crotch smells waft this way
tongue stays within my own mouth
crotch smells waft this way
on Her name was Marjorie Harper by Caducus
19 Oct 2007, 1:59 PM
she died a poem
and were you god
ten would be the score
and were you god
ten would be the score
on Henry's breeches by Stephen Robins
19 Oct 2007, 2:02 PM
poor love, give him a cosolation point
on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Oct 2007, 2:08 PM
ugh
on Life Is Like A Rose by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Oct 2007, 2:09 PM
god? ... god!
on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Oct 2007, 2:13 PM
do you know, or do you want to know, what they are doing?
on Looking Back by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Oct 2007, 2:14 PM
i'm sorry but your stuff is really dreadful ....
on Soccer by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Oct 2007, 2:16 PM
ahh ... yes; getting there (ps don't mind me ... i was crap at your age too)