on Lines and half lines by aliena
18 Jun 2007, 3:10 PM
...i think she's got it .... a self referential poem that leaps about with brilliant humour ! .......
on Just words by aliena
18 Jun 2007, 3:05 PM
this is something we all go through .... and you did care enough to submit .. in my view a poem of no value except as exercise .... but do you care? .... :-)
on some deleted poem
16 Jun 2007, 2:41 AM
ummmm ... thanx for forcing me to a deeper understanding of the haiku/Senryu form ... still digesting ... wgb
on Win, Win, Lose, Lose by Dovina
22 Jun 2007, 11:46 PM
wow, Dovina; must be yr most powerful poem yet ... tho must admit I've skipped over quite a few;... just a thought... the end i found flat because the symmetry so obviously demanded it; ... I'da skewed it a bit, ... like win, who needs it..or .loss is lost or something; ... but then then....you know;.it's yr poem :-),I'm more of an imperfectionist
on Just Another Reason by Skamper
22 Jun 2007, 11:54 PM
hi;...yeah; felt exactly the same as jessicazee about the last 3 lines; . the lead up was good enough to deserve much more ... the first 3 lines could in fact stand alone... nice changes of rhythm......7 and a half points
on California Bound by Dovina
26 Jul 2007, 1:59 PM
funny lot, them religeous
on Another Date by Dovina
6 Aug 2007, 4:51 PM
and shed a bitter tear
on I love you by jerzeygirl22
8 Aug 2007, 4:36 PM
the first stanza here swings along real nice but then the poetry (not necessarily the poetic thoughts) seems to dry up.try the rest using the meter of that ... maybe even let the first stanza stand by itself ... the fewer words, the more a poem can say .:-)
on Prescription of Pain by Miggy
8 Aug 2007, 4:40 PM
a point for "chirp"
on some deleted poem
8 Aug 2007, 4:43 PM
you seemed such a nice sensitive guy too . aaahh ...( sigh)....
on some deleted poem
8 Aug 2007, 4:44 PM
oh..bluddyell
on Sunset Beach by amanda_dcosta
8 Aug 2007, 4:45 PM
puh..leeze
on Crotchety Old Geezer by Dovina
17 Aug 2007, 6:45 AM
innit though ?!
on some deleted poem
21 Aug 2007, 7:18 AM
what is this about
i'm totally senrued out
shouts....and grabs his throat!
aaaaarrgghhh ...... 7points
i'm totally senrued out
shouts....and grabs his throat!
aaaaarrgghhh ...... 7points
on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2007, 6:00 PM
good
on If David Biespiel Wrote A Haiku by Aetius
9 Sep 2007, 6:02 PM
sol (smiled out loud)
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2007, 7:05 AM
lol ... wow ... ten ... gosh ...
on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0
18 Oct 2007, 7:36 AM
too many words
on Wayne, do you? by T. Jonathron Remp
18 Oct 2007, 7:38 AM
either a 8 or a 1 ....dunno .... say 5 .... involving, though ... make that 6