poemranker ::20 most recent comments by pete (41-60)

Comments bypete, 41–60 back. Include replies

on Bonded by Skamper 14 Jun 2007, 5:46 PM
wow...lol...catcha later
on The Search by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:10 AM
i felt the 2nd half lacked enough concrete images to hold it together ..... yeah, i did get a bit lost
on Paper Maker by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:18 AM
yeah, the preposition thing..... found it a bit hard going but was rewarded by the clarity of the final image .... stinging just the same
on The Finding by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:23 AM
reads like a wordsmith's musing on an empty-minded sunny sunday afternoon;... will search later for hidden depths, should there be any
on Llamas by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:27 AM
slide your new tongue.... nice ...teach me etc .. is this a matchstick page wandering muttering into the surreal landscape
on Empty by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:34 AM
explanation will often ruin a poem, i know, but is this about an alcoholic suicide or lonesome solitude .... or something else entirely
on View From The Gutter by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:38 AM
yesterday's primordial soup ... luvvitt ! too many words though (imho)
on The Kissing by Skamper 15 Jun 2007, 6:42 AM
mmmmm .... hardly a zero; nice sexy rhythm to start of but to maintain momentum in a poem is more difficult than in actual sex and images ought to be stronger or the poem shorter .... imho
on requiem for the dead generation by Prince of Void 7 May 2007, 4:11 PM
... cheer up; can't be that bad!
on some deleted poem 7 May 2007, 4:22 PM
absolutely
on Final Moon by Caducus 7 May 2007, 4:02 PM
kinda nice
on some deleted poem 7 May 2007, 4:03 PM
yuk but adequate
on The Emperor's new clothes by thetrev 7 May 2007, 4:27 PM
cutting edge improvisational phrasing with retro hip-hop under and overtones
on some deleted poem 7 May 2007, 4:30 PM
aaaahhh .... absolutely nice; hardly a poem of any great worth, though
on Lustlets of longing by bharat shekhar 7 May 2007, 4:32 PM
the poetry seemed to dry up after you came;... never mind, ... happens to all of us :-)
on Worn Ruse by drnick 7 May 2007, 4:35 PM
fabulous concept not done full justice by this poem
on some deleted poem 7 May 2007, 4:40 PM
got lost in the hims and yous in the final couplet
on again it happnes by skaskowski 7 May 2007, 4:45 PM
... yeah but whats it all mean? and is it Art? :-/... yes I'm sure it is :-)
on Castle of Pandas IV by FreeFormFixation 7 May 2007, 4:48 PM
string band school of creative writing seems like
on The Sunnyside of David Uden by lukehanney 7 May 2007, 4:50 PM
clunky