on snot by fattony
11 Oct 2006, 1:55 PM
started out as yet another edna yet the final line shows a true poetic sensibility ... what else ya got, dude ?
on weather poem part 1: the wolf journal by nypoet22
21 Oct 2006, 7:02 AM
well; got blown away by this; took it slow and let it speak to me , then saw all this sour-face bitchin and wondered what that was all about. in some of us poetry is a continuum and it being broken up in chunks merely a convention ( sez he pompously)... anyhow, 8 for now and will return to it later
on if really its me by Landon2
21 Sep 2006, 5:30 PM
know the feeling :)! ... reads like it should be spoken over beats. If not, i'd introduce more rests and split some lines into 2 or 3 .....
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2006, 3:14 PM
a pleasure to read...thanx :)
on untitled by harryparatestes
2 Oct 2006, 3:28 PM
not that i'm into angels but it would have worked better for me with " angels on every breeze..." ... also "opportunities" .... nit-picking i know but that's what we're here for... nice poem :)
on The Mandarin by Caducus
11 Oct 2006, 1:47 PM
when i'm loving, yet never when i fuck ... yeah, that's nice , the 2 fucks work i think, but how about when you fuck while you're loving ... freud would probably have a ball here...what with dad and all .. :)
on connect the dots by daniella
21 Oct 2006, 6:43 AM
I looked at the site and watched the whole film and would recommend any others to do the same; i think this counts as a bit more than a political statement; 10 for the lead 6 for the poem
on Work by half.italian
21 Oct 2006, 6:48 AM
lol :)
on Instruction by Dovina
26 Nov 2006, 5:49 PM
"were future world so kind" perhaps? :).....aaahh i see, a sense-timing paradox thing ... nice
on LOVES ME NOT~NOBM by Radiation
1 Feb 2007, 6:19 AM
take no notice, you can only get better; this is far superior to your earlier effort
on some deleted poem
30 Jan 2007, 7:13 AM
struck a chord. didn-t see it as anti-bush, rather as anti the other lot ... guess there's not much difference
on some deleted poem
1 Feb 2007, 6:15 AM
indeed pushes the envelope of poetry's definition; reminds me of a chelsea art school reading of a knitting pattern back in the 60s. please accept a point
on Snow by MacFrantic
7 May 2007, 3:48 PM
poweful opening swooned into greeting-card land
on some deleted poem
7 May 2007, 3:50 PM
lol
on Altitude by half.italian
7 May 2007, 3:56 PM
an unwinding coil, eh? ... wassat? helium whispers is nice
on some deleted poem
7 May 2007, 3:59 PM
empathically inclined to vote eight, but just can't
on some deleted poem
7 May 2007, 4:00 PM
the perfect haiku