poemranker ::20 most recent comments by pete (161-180)

Comments bypete, 161–180 back. Include replies

on Decisions by x311 25 Jul 2002, 4:07 PM
.... nah , carry on writing ... it's gotta be done ...
on One Summer by [mojo] 25 Jul 2002, 1:05 PM
the first stanza really rocked but i kinda lost the rhythm in the second
on older sister by wowzers718 25 Jul 2002, 1:28 PM
genius move putting it all on one line and forcing the scroll ...a true web-poem ....
on some deleted poem 27 Jul 2002, 4:46 PM


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ditto to that...respose please . ta
on some deleted poem 28 Jul 2002, 6:16 AM


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if you're looking at your poem's details, there should be a link to "reply".

duh!...thanx
on Zen by gothwalk 28 Jul 2002, 6:42 AM
the tao which is the tao is not the tao(iambic pentameter)
on some deleted poem 28 Jul 2002, 8:51 AM
... but excellent in parts ...
on Me and the Darkness by aurora 28 Jul 2002, 4:53 PM
..... still , mustn't grumble eh ! ... the old human condition doncha know ... :-)
on Little Miss Ogyny by [mojo] 25 Jul 2002, 1:15 PM
the thought is a gem but as poetry didn't quite work for me except as a springboard for further thoughts
on diving by keatsImnot 26 Jul 2002, 4:23 AM
the first two and a half lines made me laugh with its superposition of image forms (...screaming tranquility at us )..
on some deleted poem 26 Jul 2002, 4:35 AM
...try doing it without rhyme .. see how it works .
on some deleted poem 26 Jul 2002, 4:38 AM
. somewhat americocentric ... try broadening the area of global moral culpability ... :-)
on The ONE by Eline 26 Jul 2002, 4:51 AM
too many cliches following one from the other .... one per stanza would suffice :\
on ungle stop by wowzers718 25 Jul 2002, 1:37 PM
leave it be if nothing else happens and talk to him when you are an adult and to one or two close friends if you are still a child ......hth.....:-)
on to my best friend david by wowzers718 25 Jul 2002, 1:47 PM
the depth of feeling in your stuff is amazing but there's something about love poems that gets a bit yucky ..... very difficult to do without a poetic meta-structure ... so to speak :-\ ...unless i missed it .... a low mark with love
on Hate Me by lucky_cmc 25 Jul 2002, 4:20 PM
... yeah ....right ! ... nice if done to a rap rhythm
on Tangled by mikeyh53581 25 Jul 2002, 4:23 PM
..... mandolin accompaniment , perhaps ; beneath a balcony
on The First Proper Evening of Summer by [mojo] 25 Jul 2002, 1:11 PM
yeah ... the last two lines or three negated feelings of ? irritation ? at awkwardness ..compatable as a whole seemed to grate til i started with that line as a new breath/beat .. is that why there is a comma after seems in the previous line ?
on some deleted poem 25 Jul 2002, 1:51 PM
'course we do , and it's all you need .. ditto as before :-)